My Dream

My Dream

A Poem by Lloyd

 

My knees fell to the ground,
And I beheld my body upon the shore
Banging against the jagged rocks.
My blood streamed into the ocean,
Letters at first, then words straight
From the source.
They flowed with the current
To every single land,
Yet in the end,
My body shriveled up
And sank with the rest of them.

© 2008 Lloyd


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This is wonderful.!!!!. My heart just skipped a beat!! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow, that's a vivid dream! Sounds like it was a subconcious worry that you may have, about sharing your writing. Like you want to make your voice heard across all the lands, and you're willing to sacrifice your self to do it. But you fear that your voice will just fade into the multitudes of others.

Be strong, speak loudly, and carry a bullhorn if you need to!
I have faith that you shall be heard, and your writing will carry across those shores!
Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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