The Future

The future is full of roses 

with their thorns and fragrant petals.

I love you like a house is loved.
What is there

between the shadow and the soul?

If love is there,

let there be light

there.

Reviews

[Rubein Geterminah]

The visual imagery represented in the first line is strong.
Roses with thorns and petals represent love with pain which the future holds.

[Karmee]

what a lovely little write, love in light. enjoyed this

[Pete]

this is so lovely. if there is love there is everything no matter, as witnessed by the roses. love=light. nice job!

[Enchanted-Raven]

Beautifully done, great opening with the first two lines, well done :) x

[Paul Bell]

I suppose when roses bloom, there is no greater sight.
So i hope the love blooms too.