If only there was Light

I can't see you now

You're still invisible to me

through the clouds in the delicate Blue sky

The Sun, the Moon, and the Stars all together

I still can't see you

 

Im walking on the sidewalk

Then, I see your house, I walk through the gates

Your Golden gates

I still can't see you

You're walking by me, yet you don't know it

You ask yourself

What am I doing here?

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, im not really good at writing songs, this is the first thing I wrote

Reviews

[KisuKimmi]

Lol...the bright green was not perhaps the best choice...lol..it can be hard to read...but anyways... *reads*


Ooo...I do like it actually... I love this part especially:

"You're walking by me, yet you don't know it"
(you perhaps should fix the typo...you put two "k's" in walking)

[Jim Clarke]

I think you are hitting on the challenges of communication between people, not just an issue of the senses. Keep writing!!