Butterflies

Water mist disappearing into sparkling lights,
Myriads of them - like tiny fireflies.

I have seen them before,
I have seen them in your eyes,

Where are they now,
Those sparkling butterflies?

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Fantastic. The visuals you create are brilliant and clear. It was long ago, but I recall seeing eyes like that as love slipped away.

[Leo]

Describing some instant, or feeling, or emotion always fascinated me. How to bridge the gap between whats recorded in terms of disperse images, or senses, or some illusive glimpses of memory into the concrete order of words, and still being able to express what you feel. After all, if you don't feel what you write about - the readers will not feel that either. Thank You again, happy to receive such encouraging words!