Can't Make it With You

Today's the day I walk away

From you

My heart is breaking,

sad but true. 

It's all the things we've never done

And all the things well never do

And her I stand

I won't cry over you. 

You used to care, 

Brighter than gold,

was the smile you held for me. 

I guess it took us just a few to see 

There's no me in you

The wasted years 

The unshed tears. 

Now if my heart should break ill fix it

And if the walls come down I'll build it

My life will be what I make it

And I can't make it with you

As you watch me walk away

Today

I have no fear that you will ask me to stay

Fighting for our love has never been your style

Words that crush the spirit

Yea it took me awhile

To learn that salty tears 

Dripping to an open wound

Wears away the pain from a love that's doomed. 

Now if my heart should break ill fix it

And if the walls come down I'll build it

My life will be what I make it

And I can't make it with you

Oh and it's so sad baby, 

I can't make it with you. 

Author's Note

Very rough Draft. Felt it, wrote it, and posted it. All suggestions welcome.

Reviews

[Radacach]

very good and deep! you can feel the pain of losing her so vivid and strong and i love your writing style

[LynGeist]

Thank you very much. And it means a lot that you took the time to tell me.

[rnuff]

wow deep and full of powerful emotion.

[LynGeist]

Thank you Kim, for taking the time to tell me