Rock Me

Rock Me

A Poem by LynGeist
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loves struggle

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When the sunshine rocks a fuschia sky,
And the blackness fades away,
I'll still listen for the echo
Of the words you used to say.
Clenched tightly in my midnight dream
Is a hope for you and me,
Yet every painful breath I take 
Brings a haunting memory.
A time when things were simple
And laughter found it's way,
A time when lovers held their hands
And angels came to pray.
Silence is an enemy,
And doubt will cloud the heart,
The peace of love is stolen,
The heavens fall apart.
And in the wake of broken dreams,
I wonder once again,
If the wind will softly whisper,
If my broken heart will mend.
Please take away the eyes
That see what might have been,
And blow away the falling tears 
That never seem to end.

© 2013 LynGeist


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The rhythm was really good and so was the imagery. I could almost see the inner turmoil that this person was going through and it was sad but there was a certain strength about it. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


LynGeist

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I love reading your reviews,!
You had me at fuschia sky... and it only got better from there! Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thanks so much.. I truly appreciate it.. :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


i absolutely love this poem... it has great rythem, and i could conect to the emotion of this writing... well done my friend! yours truely

Posted 11 Years Ago


such an emotional, heart touching piece.
Well written and presented.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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