whats love

whats love

A Poem by lorynrrr

whats love what does it mean

i think its god and his creating

whats love about how is it made

we will find out by time and day i think love is great 

cause you spend time together and play

whats tomorrow gonna be about lets 

find out and wait 

the future is coming look and see just one thing

fit in and don't feel lonley

© 2009 lorynrrr


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you need to add me as your friend on here! haha

Posted 15 Years Ago


Suggestion:
Each line of your poem should be the beginning on a new sentence
That way your sentences are blurred together and it is easier to read that way...
Also Capitalize the 'g' in God.....

Good luck Girl!

Cheers!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 17, 2009

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lorynrrr
lorynrrr

louisiana, LA



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hey my name is loryn and im 13 and i like to sing i have a really good personality god made me cant you see i'v also an awesome family say what just kiddin so this is me i have green eyes dark dirt.. more..

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