Save The Girl

Tell me, tell me how to get back
to a world that seems so seamless
The heart of a child that's careless
Roaming young and wild and free

How, oh how can I find her?
Amidst the dark sporatic eye of the storm
That torments her mind, possesses her thoughts
& continually rages on..

The girl is lost. Tell me the cost.
To revive the child who once was.
She lingers there, she's unaware
that she's capable of being loved.

Tell me, please tell me how to save the girl
Who's desperate to find her way back.
Will she ever, can she ever find
A way to escape the mask

Reviews

[Desert Rose]

isn't it incredible
fact that we're at our freest when we're children..& we then grow & start to constrain ourselves..
beautiful read :) thanks!

[wordman]

only in your mind ,peace you will find,loved your thoughts

[GreenShoes]

You write beautifully. I enjoyed reading this very much! :))

[wordman]

but she is only lost in her mind,if she don`t find her way back ! well you know

[GreenShoes]

Hi wordman, nice to see you. :)

[wordman]

the pleasure is mine

[Gee]

Sometimes we all lose our way, try to be something we think others expect, want us to be. Enjoyed this

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

Thank you, Gee!

[@JenniferNicholeAuthor]

I see why you recommended this one for me. ;) She's a lost girl, your lines reflect that in more than one way. You are talented at playing with the body of your poems. I'm going to read more...

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

It's my new one, so was just wondering what others thought. Thank you!!:)