Story of a Lonely Girl

Story of a Lonely Girl

A Poem by Jesus & Gypsy Soul

This can't be the end
My stomach is sick from the lies that I spin
I need to spit this out but I'm hopeless to begin

Running through these days; these weeks are drifting on
A smile on my face, but I'm too far gone
It's the same old story, go ahead, sing along.

This is the story of a lonely girl
Spinning her wheels; waiting on a world
Where she can love and be loved
Acquire something tangible; something real

But the mask cannot be stripped, can't be peeled
With no hopes to reveal
The dead dull heart of a sad and lonely girl.

© Copyright 2016 Elizabeth Eberhardt All Rights Reserved

© 2016 Jesus & Gypsy Soul


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Sad and heartbreaking tone prevailing in the poem... The pain and burden of this world seems to pile in the heart of the girl, it seems that she is unable to break free from her pain... The poem looks amazing with a story of a girl under pain and heartbreak... Beautifully done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


sounds like your looking for that perfect life,but your wearing a mask to hide who you are

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 9, 2016
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Jesus & Gypsy Soul
Jesus & Gypsy Soul

San Antonio, TX



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