It seems I am constantly bombarded with strokes of genius cascading from my brain and rippling outward into every corner of my body, waiting for an outlet.
But, on those rare occasions that my consciousness puts forth an effort to create something out of a blank canvass I am plagued by insignificant mutterings of lack-luster ideas and meaningless thought.
There's something, for lack of a better word, colorful about that last line. It's probably my favorite part of this extremely relatable poem. I like this it makes me smile and also wring my mind for even an ounce of conscious creativity. Though that doesn't produce anything good.. I really like this. I think you've got this poetry thing down packed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks so much
This was written out of pure frustration
9 Years Ago
Frustration can create beauty.. sometimes.
9 Years Ago
The other day I told my mom how I have a dilemma because when things are going great in my life I'm .. read moreThe other day I told my mom how I have a dilemma because when things are going great in my life I'm not compelled to write but am bursting with creativity when things are going horribly.
She told me to pray about it.
It makes sense. Happy feelings are to be enjoyed you express them by enjoying them. Negative feeling.. read moreIt makes sense. Happy feelings are to be enjoyed you express them by enjoying them. Negative feelings need to be released usually through a creative medium. Venting makes you feel better so it's only natural I say.
9 Years Ago
THANK YOU! I've wondered for a long time if it was bad for me to feel that way. But, your idea makes.. read moreTHANK YOU! I've wondered for a long time if it was bad for me to feel that way. But, your idea makes a lot of sense!
9 Years Ago
Hahaha yea I've been wondering why, because I do that too so I was really thinking about it for a wh.. read moreHahaha yea I've been wondering why, because I do that too so I was really thinking about it for a while.
I think this is really beautiful. It sounds like a random excerpt from a book I haven't yet gotten the pleasure to read. Your writing seems like a very finite, and limited window into your brain. How lovely!
I think I just read the true definition of creativity.
I absolutely loved that very long, last sentence. You sealed it flawlessly.
I understand where you're coming fron. Creativity is the skeleton of my life!
Magnificent job, Lizzie!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
THANK YOUUUUUUU :D
i'm glad so many people can relate
I feel so creative all the timeread moreTHANK YOUUUUUUU :D
i'm glad so many people can relate
I feel so creative all the time
but I get writer's block a lot
(hence the unfished work on my page)
There's something, for lack of a better word, colorful about that last line. It's probably my favorite part of this extremely relatable poem. I like this it makes me smile and also wring my mind for even an ounce of conscious creativity. Though that doesn't produce anything good.. I really like this. I think you've got this poetry thing down packed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much
This was written out of pure frustration
9 Years Ago
Frustration can create beauty.. sometimes.
9 Years Ago
The other day I told my mom how I have a dilemma because when things are going great in my life I'm .. read moreThe other day I told my mom how I have a dilemma because when things are going great in my life I'm not compelled to write but am bursting with creativity when things are going horribly.
She told me to pray about it.
It makes sense. Happy feelings are to be enjoyed you express them by enjoying them. Negative feeling.. read moreIt makes sense. Happy feelings are to be enjoyed you express them by enjoying them. Negative feelings need to be released usually through a creative medium. Venting makes you feel better so it's only natural I say.
9 Years Ago
THANK YOU! I've wondered for a long time if it was bad for me to feel that way. But, your idea makes.. read moreTHANK YOU! I've wondered for a long time if it was bad for me to feel that way. But, your idea makes a lot of sense!
9 Years Ago
Hahaha yea I've been wondering why, because I do that too so I was really thinking about it for a wh.. read moreHahaha yea I've been wondering why, because I do that too so I was really thinking about it for a while.
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