Alive

something i wrote in July.. when i first joined writerscafe kinda wierd but i dont care lol

I just say it how it is

I feel as if i exist

expressing myself at first

made me want to puke;

before, I couldn't even

fathom what it felt like

I merely neglected it.

like how andy gave away 

woody in toys story 3,

expressing my opinions

is like having to grow up

and leaving the past behind

to a fresh clean sheet of paper

or a computer screen.

Author's Note

suggestions are welcomed always :)

Reviews

[Jason Shadows]

But What If We Can Reverse It? Take A Step Back In Time To Change Something We Wish Would Not Of Happened. Take A Step Back And See It From A Different Point Of View. Thats How We Learn From The Mistakes That Are In The Past But Your Life Is Precious. Enjoy It And Have Fun. From This Poem - Deep Emotions Of Something That Hurts Or Haunts You Digs Its Self From The Past But Creeps Up To The Future.

Now Look At It And See Something Better In Time.
Just Smile Thats All. :)

[Apple]

I dont think this is weird at all this is great! :)

[Bubo]

I think being young and expressing yourself can be hard, but as we get older opinions get stronger! This is a good piece, telling of maturity. You no longer need to be quiet!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

I don't think it's weird at all, Elizabeth...(besides..You're at writerscafe...even if it was weird...You'd be praised for Your originality :P haha) it actually makes sense to me...when You express Yourself...when You say what You mean..You come alive...cause You're not hiding from Yourself or others....You've accepted this need to express Yourself...and so You write :) My sentiments exactly....when You embrace it...that's when it comes forth full-speed :)