Vaccine

A Book by LizLadyNinja

The AIDs Virus finally has a cure. Unfortunatly, the side effects of the vaccine is that it turns the recipiant into a Zombie.

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© 2008 LizLadyNinja

Author's Note

This is a work in progress! We are hoping to work on it a bit more this summer. It went on Haitus when school started back up.

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Jared Kardos

AIDS vaccine turns people to zombies? Heh, clever, gotta give you that.Pretty good, there are some slight typos, but nothing that a quick read-through and edit can't fix.Also, I think you could perhaps write the events in different ways. It feels like when we got to what happened at the facility like it was just "he did this, then she did that. Then she ran away like a fraidy-cat-like-thing." Nothing terribly wrong, I'm just saying you can switch up your word choice, maybe add some more description, make the environment and the characters really stand out.Still, pretty good work. Can't wait for the next installment.

Posted 17 Years Ago

8 of 8 people found this review constructive.

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Jared Kardos

Posted 17 Years Ago

8 of 8 people found this review constructive.

Writer6886

Creepy. I hope you continue I would like to see how this plays out.

Posted 17 Years Ago

7 of 8 people found this review constructive.

Nic

ahh very nice, puts a twist on zombies. kinda like resident evil, but the vaccine is for something totally different. i like it though, nice start.
-Nic

Posted 17 Years Ago

7 of 8 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 18, 2008

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LizLadyNinja

Denver, CO

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I joined Writerscafe almost 10 years ago, when it was in its infancy. I dealt with the breakdown when it lost our writing and many of my pieces were unrecoverable. Which, as you can imagine was pretty.. more..