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Bridal Delights

Bridal Delights

A Poem by LizLadyNinja
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Thoughts about Being a Bride

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Italian Gowns and Satin Shoes
Rhinestones and Diamonds; whatever I choose
My hair done up; fashioned in curls
And maybe a string of real white pearls

Cascading flowers; falling like tears
The registry is finished and waiting at Sears
The veil pulled down, over my eyes
Looking at me, mama tries not to cry

Ive followed tradition; have a six pence in my shoe
And something old, new, borrowed and blue
Picked the best music, and did it with care
This wedding will have some young love flair

Now its time to cut the cake
Of the champagne we do partake
Dancing can be the most fun
Daughter and Father; Mother and Son

This is our wedding day,
In the month just before May.
Our lives have just begun,
Lets party now, have some fun!
 

© 2008 LizLadyNinja


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That is some neat work.

Very well written. Nice. Felt like getting married...haha.

Shinjini


Posted 16 Years Ago


very nice. i am too young to get married, but that sounds like it would be. i liked this a lot. very nice. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH! I felt like that when I got married. Such a beautiful day with someone you love so very dearly. You have brought back some wonderful memories for me!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice. A great way to look at the beginning of a marriage.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 26, 2008

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LizLadyNinja
LizLadyNinja

Denver, CO



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I joined Writerscafe almost 10 years ago, when it was in its infancy. I dealt with the breakdown when it lost our writing and many of my pieces were unrecoverable. Which, as you can imagine was pretty.. more..

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