Hate Me

A poem about a friend who turned me into the bad guy and pitted everyone against me

Hate Me

 

Hate me today

You see its okay

I don’t really mind

Because it is you who is blind

 

Hate me tomorrow

It is not you I have to follow

By myself I’ll make my way

You’re not going to ruin my day

 

Hate me forever

As long as you want, whenever

I don’t really care

Your emotional baggage was too much to bear

 

Hate me till the day I die

It’s not like I didn’t try

Because as much as you hate me

There is someone out there who is that much in love with me

 

Reviews

[Hope]

You should try to make the really long lines shorter to better the flow...
I practiced my flow by writing all of my poems with syllable counts (sometimes like 7-8-7-8 etc or 7-7-8-8 syllables per stanza, but i would make each stanza the same as the last) for a long while..

now I sometimes write with a count.. but not too often... it helped my flow soo much though...

[Ashly Christen]

reminds me of the song by hinder. i was listening to it yesterday
and i like it
nicely done

[Matthew Kult]

A style close to my heart. I love it. Although I think it should be bare not bear but hell what do I know I can't spell. It's always best to get out in one way or another. Much safer writing about it then getting a gun placing it to their and blowing their f*****g skull all over the pavement....oh sorry. Anyway good job and keep it up.