Dance Revolution

A poem about dancing!

Dance Revolution

 

Electric charge in the beat,

I feel the pulse and move my feet

Sway my arms and swing my hips

The words rest softly on my lips

 

Sing a long to the song

When I dance nothings wrong

Loosen up and move about

Released now from all my doubt

 

I feel the charge, in my blood

Through my body music floods

Twirl and spin in perfect time

The words and music seem to rhyme

 

Jump now, and touch the ground

I’m enamored with the sound

This is my dance, not wrong or right,

                         and I’m going to dance with all my might

 

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

really nice ryhming and stuff...
but what i really like is that this piece allows the reader to feel the same thing you are writing about.
i can almost hear that music playing,
the pulsing of the song...

"This is my dance, not wrong or right,
and I�m going to dance with all my might"
nice ending