A Me Without You

A Me Without You

A Poem by LizLadyNinja
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Poem written my senior year of high school!

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A Me Without You

 

Alone together, laying in bed

You leave sweet kisses on my forehead

Listening to your heart as you fall asleep

Its you forever I want to keep

 

Looking out the window and up to the sky

I thank god that I gave you a try

Sometimes I wonder where I would be

If you hadn’t been interested in me

 

And I wonder if there would be, a me without you

Hear my words, they are real and true

You picked me up when I was down

When I was lost, by you I was found

 

Wrapping your arms around, you pull me close

Of them all I love you the most

When I fell you grabbed my hand

Helped me back to my feet, to learn how to stand

 

Since you. I’ve not shed a tear

When you’re around, there’s nothing I fear

And I wonder where I’d be

If you hadn’t been interested in me

 

I gaze in your eyes and all I see

Are the hopes for you and me

This is our story from beginning to end

My forever, my lover, my friend

 

© 2008 LizLadyNinja


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And I wonder if there would be, a me without you
Hear my words, they are real and true
You picked me up when I was down
When I was lost, by you I was found

YES! I know how you feel! This was perfect and wonderfully well written honey! Great job with this and with touching the perfect emotional chord inside of me!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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And I wonder if there would be, a me without you
Hear my words, they are real and true
You picked me up when I was down
When I was lost, by you I was found

YES! I know how you feel! This was perfect and wonderfully well written honey! Great job with this and with touching the perfect emotional chord inside of me!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 5, 2008

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LizLadyNinja
LizLadyNinja

Denver, CO



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I joined Writerscafe almost 10 years ago, when it was in its infancy. I dealt with the breakdown when it lost our writing and many of my pieces were unrecoverable. Which, as you can imagine was pretty.. more..

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