ABC's of Love

ABC's of Love

A Poem by LizLadyNinja
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A...B....C... I L U V U 2

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All I want to do is
Be here with you.
Can you hold me tight? Try and
Drown me with your love.
Everything that I do, I do
For only you. So
Give me your
Heart, and give me your soul.
I promise that I’ll be very careful.
Just trust me and take my hand.
Kiss me deeply,
Love me passionately.
Move me like you’ve
Never moved another.
Open your heart, and
Pour it out to me.
Quietly whisper in my ear,
Resounding confessions of love.
Stir my heart, and
Tell me you love me.
Under a dark,
Velvet sky,
We talk about all the things we are going to do, and e-
Xotic places we will go.
Yes, stir these emotions, and drive me crazy. Taste my
Zesty peppermint kiss.

© 2008 LizLadyNinja


Author's Note

LizLadyNinja
HAHA this was just for fun!

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I did one of these and my friend Jared! There was a contest I think! Yours is very very good Liz!!!

My fave lines:
Open your heart, and
Pour it out to me.
Quietly whisper in my ear,
Resounding confessions of love.

Wonderful poem and not the easiest thing to write. I love the way you "cheated" with X! LOL!

XXOXX

Posted 17 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.




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I enjoyed it....I came up with a scheme awhile back where you write words down the side of the page and start each line with the letter....you can write names or messages down the side and then start writing....tinker around with this idea I think you will enjoy it....

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This was wonderful. Thought I'd check out your softer side! Where was the moonlight? I like a bit of moonlight for romance.
The zesty peppermint kiss was clever though.
Well thought out and not an easy task to do.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I did one of these and my friend Jared! There was a contest I think! Yours is very very good Liz!!!

My fave lines:
Open your heart, and
Pour it out to me.
Quietly whisper in my ear,
Resounding confessions of love.

Wonderful poem and not the easiest thing to write. I love the way you "cheated" with X! LOL!

XXOXX

Posted 17 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.

Not many people could pull this sort of thing off, but you can for sure. Great write.

Posted 17 Years Ago


8 of 8 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 10, 2008

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LizLadyNinja
LizLadyNinja

Denver, CO



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