ABC's of Love

A...B....C... I L U V U 2

All I want to do is
Be here with you.
Can you hold me tight? Try and
Drown me with your love.
Everything that I do, I do
For only you. So
Give me your
Heart, and give me your soul.
I promise that I’ll be very careful.
Just trust me and take my hand.
Kiss me deeply,
Love me passionately.
Move me like you’ve
Never moved another.
Open your heart, and
Pour it out to me.
Quietly whisper in my ear,
Resounding confessions of love.
Stir my heart, and
Tell me you love me.
Under a dark,
Velvet sky,
We talk about all the things we are going to do, and e-
Xotic places we will go.
Yes, stir these emotions, and drive me crazy. Taste my
Zesty peppermint kiss.

Author's Note

HAHA this was just for fun!

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

I did one of these and my friend Jared! There was a contest I think! Yours is very very good Liz!!!

My fave lines:
Open your heart, and
Pour it out to me.
Quietly whisper in my ear,
Resounding confessions of love.

Wonderful poem and not the easiest thing to write. I love the way you "cheated" with X! LOL!

XXOXX

[Casanova]

well I liked the passion displayed here and while it may have been for fun I think you may have a talent for romantic poetry

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

Writing should always be about the autor's enjoyment first. That way the readers can feel his/her passion about their work. It was a nice, mellow piece.

[Brandon]

Nice job on this. I was wondering how x was gonna be used.Very creative using the abc's

[vanishing]

nice job, i liked the entire passionate concept, as well
as the emphasize on the desirously blisful romantic reflection

the idea of a peppermint kiss, thats lighthearted and cheery,
the eloquent form, this is a fun read, expressed with
heartfelt enchanting depth, i love the ending!

Thanks!

[Ruby Moon]

:)
the whole thing is really good
i think if i had to pick something that is not so good...it would be the last 4 lines
but only because i have some prejudge against some of those alphabates
(namely "X" and "Z")
they are always so hard to make words with...
and also the lines are a little longer then the rest of the piece

but i really love if from "A" to "V"
^-^

[BBuggy]

Hey, this was a very beautiful poem. I really like how you worked in each letter of the alphabet. It flows along really nice and has a powerful message. Great job sweeie!
XOXOXOXO
Brit

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Argh! I have such difficulties rating and reviewing love poems. They are all special and beuatiful in their own way. I think that love skews my judgment.

However, it seemed very good.

Peace,
Gabe

[Michael Lasalle]

liz, sweeping passion, as romantic
enchantment, desirous imagery, some
people are just born to write, a
nd you are one of them, peace, mike

[James K. Blaylock]

A very cool write, I just love that ending!

Taste my
Zesty peppermint kiss.

[Richard Garen]

:0) Excellent.