love to you

ok i am sorry the other one was my first time doing tis so it did not work as i wanted... so the thing about it is that my uncle had died this year and i was very emotional and so this is what enspired me to write...

 

Love to You

 

I never had the chance to say good bye

I never once said I love you

And now you are far far away

I’ll never get another chance to tell you

How I feel

I am so mad cause you are gone

And now all I wish for is you

We weren’t close but we are still family

And now you lie there with eternal peace

And I am here with a life long pain

I miss you so much I think I’ve gone insane

But now all I can do is talk to you with no response

But I hope you hear the words I say to you, well here goes one last chance

I LOVE YOU!

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

So full or love... this is a really good piece. Great job.

[MagicHearted Knight]

The pain and regret behind those words is profound and deep. Excellent work.

[K. Carver]

very nice...deep...we've been in the same place...this stands for me too...so thank you....

[jess]

good job liz... can i call u liz?

[Drow]

To anyone who has lost someone, this speaks a lot more than just words. It's a wonderful piece, you can feel the regret of unspoken words just by the first line It's really touching I hope you continue to write more masterpieces,
Kudos.