soda pop

soda pop

A Poem by Lizzy

 

SODA POP
 
If you think, we people are just like soda pop
Soda gets poured in a glass, we are born
The soda does fizzy bubbles, time goes by for us
Soda gets drank, we die
Soda is one of the things like us
It is “born, it lives and then it dies”
It is easier for soda pop though, at least it seems
I mean I don’t really know, I’m not soda pop!
 
 

 

© 2008 Lizzy


Author's Note

Lizzy
WELL THE REASON FOR THIS IS THAT I WAS COMPARING LIFE AND I JUST LET MY MIND GO WHERE IT WANTED!!!

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I liked this. It was quite humorous :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


"I mean I don't really know, I'm not soda pop!" ...This was really cool!
I liked this!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow excellent work liz u really compared soda pop 2 humans. (no sarcasm intended)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hey that's what a lot of people do, but unlike you they don't always put it down on paper or type it out. very short and very good.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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ok so i am going to swithch things up.. i decided that i dont want all of my stuff to be sad i am going to say happy things too... i am going trough a new stage n my life and it is pretty exciting!!! .. more..

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