The Meadows (Last Poem of 2015)

The last poem, Hope you like this one although I don't think its good, anyways, Happy new year!

Deep in the meadows

Deep inside a silent mind 

There is a place where we can hide

From the reflections of our mind

Dreams within Dreams

Years within years

Days within days

A struggle always comes near 

Fight against fight 

Fright against fright

Remember to always leave a light on

Or else you may be caught by them again

The year comes to an end

Our struggles come to an end

Our fight finally ceases 

Our thoughts are finally silent 

Our minds are in peace with ourselves

Deep inside the meadows

Deep inside the silent wind

Deep inside the unreal sun  

They make us think that there's something wrong

When in fact, they are the ones who don't get along

Hours withing hours

Life within Life

Happiness with the heart

A year the paints Art

Deep inside the meadows

We shall rest with ourselves

Love for love 

Happiness for Happiness

No more struggles from this day on 

No more fights from 12 Midnight on 

Let's enjoy our writing

Deep within the meadows

Where the wind is silent

Where the sun hugs us 

Where there is peace and happiness 

Where there is no fear

Under the tree of life 

Where it's shade shall cover us from our fears 

Let's enjoy our last piece of writing this year 

Let's enjoy with our families 

Let's enjoy with God

There's no space in the house

For a splinter to make us fall 

There is no space for sadness

To burst its away into us

Because today its about us and everyone

Today is a day of happiness and parties 

No one is permitted to fall this day 

Today we stand up high with our hopes towards the sky 

At 12 A.M we will be reborn

Let's enjoy our writing

Lets keep away the Anxiety

Lets keep away the hate

The paranoia 

Everything the hurts us 

Lets push it away 

And soon they'll go away

They'll give up on us 

So they'll remind silent 

For when we open the door again

Remember

You are the President of your mind (Quite don't know if you follow a democracy or anarchy in your mind) 

If you want to, you can make everything that hurts you go away

Just don't hug it and you'll be okay  

Lets enjoy the last hours remaining of 2015 

Lets finish of with our best of best

Let's all be a community of writers

With our best writing 

So that our writing can travel deep in the hearts of the fallen ones and the victorious ones

To everyone

Happy New year From El Salvador, lets all have a good time today!   

Author's Note

In the poem, I sometimes say: Them or they, I'm referring to my thoughts or the thoughts that we all have that are like splinters, we feel like everything is nice but yet something is bothering us. I thank God that I'm finally leaving that torment behind and I hope that everyone too is.

Lets enjoy the new year! Happy new year from El Salvador to the World!
(And yeah, I've kind of had a Writers Block episode, so this is not my best writing, well I think it sucks but I didn't want to leave behind the old year without my last poem)
I would like your thoughts on this one!

Reviews

[Moonlight]

First of, really sorry for the late response to the read request. I know I am late by a year... and I am sorry.

And I really did enjoy reading this. I like the way you actually personified the thoughts and showed that people and thoughts are two different entities. It's nice. :)

-moonlight

[B]

A nice way to end one year and begin a new one
Full or promise and love
and untied to pain or hurt from all that has passed

[DoormanDan]

I will admit, I wasn't sure what you were referring to until I read your Author's note(not criticizing, I'm just saying). Anyway, with this poem, you ended 2015 in fashion, Lizardo. Everything you wrote, about straying for violence actions and thoughts, caring for family, friends and strangers, and putting our own troubles behind us for a brand new start explicitly defines what the start of a new year symbolizes. As your poem puts it, "let's just celebrate!":)

[Willard Wells]

Great positive message to end the year. Well done. It had the feel of a death, which for 2015 it was. Nicely penned young man.

[dan]

Lighting a light to ward off danger is a common defense. Lighting a light within our souls wards off many of the inner demons that try to drag our goodness to the brink, but never pushed over the edge. The premise of the piece is a peaceful meadow, which contains the essence of warmth, which keeps the light in our souls burning brightly. You didn't think this was a good write? Read it again, Lizardo...look for that essence of warmth, wrap it around your shoulders, then read it again. Hopefully you'll see the tactful nuances within each line. Nice job writing this piece, very nice. take care...dan

[Cool Girl]

This was extroidinary! Your words are so powerful and truthful, Lizardo. You write from the heart. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us readers. Happy New Year, my dearest friend and writer :)

[Lizardo]

Oh thank you Aless you are an extraordinary writer too! But I think you would like a lot the newest one, it's the book call: Untitle if you want to check it out :)
Thank you a lot Aless :)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome! And I'll be sure to read it! :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Sorry I missed reading it in the last year:).. Happy New Year my friend and what a lovely piece of writing...good one....

[Tania]

"Let's enjoy our writing
Deep within the meadows
Where the wind is silent
Where the sun hugs us
Where there is peace and happiness
Where there is no fear
Under the tree of life
Where it's shade shall cover us from our fear"

Beautifully written :)

[Valentine]

The first grouping says it all. You have some very nice lines in this write. Have a great New Year too. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and beautiful use of words.
"Let's enjoy our last piece of writing this year
Let's enjoy with our families
Let's enjoy with God"
I liked the above lines. Have a safe and fun New Years. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote