Teardrops

What do you think of this one?

Teardrops falling from a leaf

Sunlight shining above the tree

Morning light that lights the sky

Where ideas come to life

 

Teardrops falling from a roof

Soothing sound of the rain hitting the ground

A depressive view of life is born

But a vital dream is gone

 

Teardrops falling from the sky

It rains wildly with lies

A little boy stands in the front door of his house

Waiting for his mommy to return home in time

 

Teardrops falling from the earth

It trembles and moves with death

Animals roaming around earth

Waiting patiently for their death

 

Teardrops falling from sky

Its another twisted day with lies

But I've learned how to come out of it

Without crying at night

Reviews

[Amy R]

love the poem,
keep writing!
looking forward to reading more :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Amy R]

no need, u deserved it!

[Smokey]

I really enjoyed this poem good job :)
Keep on writing!
I really like how you captured nature and the sadness.

[Brittany Bostic]

This was a very good poem. I enjoyed this one a lot and really understood the meaning. I think you are a good writer. :)

[Not here]

i always enjoy your poems but this was even better. good job :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dante, I really appreciate it :)

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Well written and wonderfully expressive. Loved the word choice and adored the phasing

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!!

[andrew mitchell]

Sad but well written and expressed. I liked this!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Emily]

One of my new favorites of yours!
Well done!
Keep on writing!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Emily]

Your welcome!

[Creator]

Depression is hard to overcome, especially without help. I loved every line.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much creator!

[Creator]

You're welcome. Check my profile there's something you might want to read.

[Lizardo]

Okay I will

[zaisham9393]

beautifully expressed..
thanks for sharing :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and emotional ride in your words.
"Teardrops falling from sky
Its another twisted day with lies
But I've learned how to come out of it
Without crying at night"
Sadness is hard to hide and the night can rebirth places missed and needed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lizardo]

Thank you for such a great review! really thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.