A Human's Monologue

Another new thing

I'm just flesh and bone

Nothing else than a star that’s gone

Nothing more than a dream come true

 

What is life? What is space? What is time?

A fogged shrouds my true intentions

Nerveless I must control my thoughtful emotions

They may end my world's notion

 

Therefore I sit under the sky

Watching what there is left to find

Waiting for a signal of life

Waiting for my heart to ignite

 

I am nothing more than thoughts

My heart is muscle that needs to fight

My brain is the center of the endless night

 

Because watching the people around us

Isn't worth our time  or there's to be worth

Because you are just sitting or walking or thinking

Yet you don't know what you are making or dreaming

 

Therefore I say out loud to our world

A world that was given from God:

"I am nothing more than flesh and bone,

I may be a thought walking in a dream,

I'm not real nor a muse, I am me

I don't know where home is

I cry when I forget who I am

I feel sad when I'm alone

I am not real nor am I a thought

I'm just a walking soul

Trying to drink water at night

For my endless flight"

 

Author's Note

So, what you think of this one?

Reviews

[dan]

zardo, A very introspective self-appraisal, a well written assessment of who or what you are in this huge cosmos. Very deep thinking, a lot of conscious thinking...a very nice write. take care...dan

[Lizardo]

dan, thank you again for you great review friend, it really means a lot

[Willard Wells]

Nicely done. Nice flow and imagery. I like it.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Willard

[Terrence Chang]

This is a good write Lizardo. Keep it up

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Terrence

[Daisy]

awesome..........
I'm just a walking soul
Trying to drink water at night
For my endless flight" These lines just hit you hard..... Wonderful poem

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Daisy!

[closed]

awesome capture of emotion in this piece Lizardo

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dream

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sounds like one who is completely lost in thought, trying desperately to find someone or something to ignite the heart...finding one's purpose isn't always easy because we aren't always sure what is real or not...and the water we thirst for is that food for the soul, love...

i may be off the road but that's what i see here...

[Lizardo]

No no it is good, I made it so people could create its own meaning the bes suits them
Thank you so much Ledrew! It really means a lot, if you need anything, just ask.

[Perkele.7885]

It is a little mind boggling to me because I am so use to thinking inside the box. I am old school that way. I am open to new ideas but I need to be convinced more than the average puddle jumper bandwagon jumper of today's generation!

[Lizardo]

Hahaha yeah I get that a lot from my friends, they're like: Lizardo, your twisting our minds hahaha.
Thanks thought for the review Perkele, your reviews are always appreciate it and helpful.