Happy Dream

This probably one of things I wrote in a happy mood... How did it come out?

Here's a happy dream 

That I take it in within

I keep on winning with it

Made my mom happy 

Made my sad father smile 

I never had to dream 

because I've always dreamed

Dreaming is my life 

It's a happy dream 

A happy dream of life 

Even If I told you about it 

even if Told everyone around me 

They wouldn't listen to me

Ah.... 

And again 

Made my sad face smile 

Made the sky look bright blue 

Made my heart grow an inch bigger 

My my soul believe once again

Yet I'm still 

I'm still chasing the future

While this dream puts a departure

To my sad face and rupture

Heart....

A little flower grows at the top of a my face

A little noble act to the myself 

And everyone else

Yet I feel like life is hard

But thats not only me 

Let's all dream 

A beautiful happy Dream 

That can someday make a difference 

That can someday make us smile 

That can someday make my sad face come to life again 

Make our families unite 

Make a difference on this world 

Make us joke around 

That can make us believe again 

Like a piano playing

A beautiful symphony of life 

A nice person knocking at your door 

Wants to be friends before

You lose it all around 

Before you lose your dream

Here's a happy dream

That we all have in within

Praying everynight for it to be real

For us to stop waking up in this cold reality 

For us to have peace

For us to be Happy

Reviews

[closed]

dreaming is an ideal way to escape reality
the truth is, that eventually we have to wake up and live in that reality

but sometimes the two can become synonymous
if we're willing to work for it^


A dream write friend


-Dream

[Emily]

I like your wording!
Well done!

[Perkele.7885]

I like the message that you are sending but, I do not care for your choice of formats, chasing the poem all over the screen.

[D.T.]

Beautiful and and sort of inspiring and positive.

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
I like the structure and message is solid:)
Dream big my friend but believe in those dreams as well,
all things are possible with God! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!