Happy Dream

This probably one of things I wrote in a happy mood... How did it come out?

Here's a happy dream 

That I take it in within

I keep on winning with it

Made my mom happy 

Made my sad father smile 

I never had to dream 

because I've always dreamed

Dreaming is my life 

It's a happy dream 

A happy dream of life 

Even If I told you about it 

even if Told everyone around me 

They wouldn't listen to me

Ah.... 

And again 

Made my sad face smile 

Made the sky look bright blue 

Made my heart grow an inch bigger 

My my soul believe once again

Yet I'm still 

I'm still chasing the future

While this dream puts a departure

To my sad face and rupture

Heart....

A little flower grows at the top of a my face

A little noble act to the myself 

And everyone else

Yet I feel like life is hard

But thats not only me 

Let's all dream 

A beautiful happy Dream 

That can someday make a difference 

That can someday make us smile 

That can someday make my sad face come to life again 

Make our families unite 

Make a difference on this world 

Make us joke around 

That can make us believe again 

Like a piano playing

A beautiful symphony of life 

A nice person knocking at your door 

Wants to be friends before

You lose it all around 

Before you lose your dream

Here's a happy dream

That we all have in within

Praying everynight for it to be real

For us to stop waking up in this cold reality 

For us to have peace

For us to be Happy

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

There's an old song "Life is But a Dream". And it says life is what you make of it. We all have dreams and they will take us where we want to go or lead us in the right direction. It is not a smooth ride and more challenging for some than others. Keep dreaming and you will find the life that you desire. Very nice and thanks.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

a very unique presentation of this beautiful poem.... I loved the way you care about people around you....good one my friend

[Moonlight]

I love this one! Really... it just reaches out to me and makes me smile. Beautifully written. Great Job! :)

[Daisygirl]

Wonderful description! I loved how the poem felt a bit disconnected, like a dream.

[anne]

Here's a happy dream
That we all have in within
Praying everynight for it to be real
For us to stop waking up in this cold reality
For us to have peace
For us to be Happy.........sweet, beautiful,lovely..a beautiful message..:))

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Very well done. :) i like your writes. Sad thing is...that if i'd start dreaming...well...doesn't matter. Keep writing. I'm rating this 100# and adding to my favorites.

[B]

Dreaming is the only way to free fall
and to be truly alive

I love this poem and the message you put through it

[Confuser]

Lizardo: It a beautiful inspiring heartwarming poem. The aspiration and hopes for humanity is like a Happy Dream. I enjoyed reading every single hopefilled word from the beginning. The theme is wonderful and many people would love to read it and would smile. Great work and I thank you. GRINNING! Just fantastic work. Dale

[dan]

Boy, someone's in a great mood, yes? I had to smile so wide it made my face crack (people always told me that it would some day). Enjoy the joy, and write as if you're dancing! take care...dan

[Matching Socks]

Good honest flow of thoughts with an uplifting message.
I like it. :)