Happy Dream

This probably one of things I wrote in a happy mood... How did it come out?

Here's a happy dream 

That I take it in within

I keep on winning with it

Made my mom happy 

Made my sad father smile 

I never had to dream 

because I've always dreamed

Dreaming is my life 

It's a happy dream 

A happy dream of life 

Even If I told you about it 

even if Told everyone around me 

They wouldn't listen to me

Ah.... 

And again 

Made my sad face smile 

Made the sky look bright blue 

Made my heart grow an inch bigger 

My my soul believe once again

Yet I'm still 

I'm still chasing the future

While this dream puts a departure

To my sad face and rupture

Heart....

A little flower grows at the top of a my face

A little noble act to the myself 

And everyone else

Yet I feel like life is hard

But thats not only me 

Let's all dream 

A beautiful happy Dream 

That can someday make a difference 

That can someday make us smile 

That can someday make my sad face come to life again 

Make our families unite 

Make a difference on this world 

Make us joke around 

That can make us believe again 

Like a piano playing

A beautiful symphony of life 

A nice person knocking at your door 

Wants to be friends before

You lose it all around 

Before you lose your dream

Here's a happy dream

That we all have in within

Praying everynight for it to be real

For us to stop waking up in this cold reality 

For us to have peace

For us to be Happy

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Great tale Lizardo. Gave a thought to it.

[flickering candle]

dreaming reality into a happy dream, i love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Positive and good words in the poetry.
"For us to have peace
For us to be Happy"
I wish and pray for the same things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bluefire]

What a purrty dream.
Very wishful piece.
Well done. ^^

[alf]

Hi Lizardo. wow!! yes you have done it!!! So loved this!!! So much so, I'd really like to offer you a challenge . . . love to see you write your own response to this poem in a super positive manner. Woew!!! that would be something really sublime!!! Look forward to it!!! alf

[Lizardo]

I'll take the challange Alf, I'm in :)

[alf]

Wow!!! So glad!!! I am so looking forward to what you come up with!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Amber Lily]

I find it difficult to write happy poetry, so I understand the struggle. However, I think you did a fantastic job! This can be really inspiring, and even though your happy, there's no reason to not reach to the stars and try to be even happier. A great write :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Though it is a hopeful poem, it still has some sad residue. But more happy than sad, that is for sure. Very inspiring as well!

[Tania]

Fantastic ! I i loved it and enjoyed it so much ... great job :)

[andrew mitchell]

a heart warming complex poem presented with many emotions , many questions which reflects on oneself

[Not here]

your poems are always fantastic :)