The Law Of Life

Never ever give up...

This ain't a fight

This is a game to thrive 

There's no winners here

You just keep on running till the end

Hey! but you fall down 

Other racers move in front of your now 

Get up

You failed, you move on, you do it right 

You failed, you move on, you do things right

You failed, you move on, you are a human who thrives

This is the law of life 

Where there are many behind you

Many infront of you 

But we all want to be in front

So we keep on trying untill were there

Hey! don't lose it while your up there

Power corrupts the one who have fallen there 

Keep your toes steady, ready for the fight

Becasue you don't know 

When the first  punch is about to strike 

So keep on trying 

Keep on moving on

Cause we all want to be heroes you know 

So keep on trying

Try till you get it right

because we all want to at the top you know 

So hey!

Don't feel sad

We have many defeats in common

So hey! 

Move on ! 

We all want to feel happy you know 

Its a long fight

Its where you fall down

Its where you feel sad

You get out alive

or Your get kick out inside

So remember 

To keep your feet steady

One day 

Can change the history of the world for good

So hey!

Listen to me

No more this boring poem

You can do it 

It's been inside

It is inside you 

Don't feel sad

Grab your fist 

Grab your greatest weapon

Your mind

And go out there

Don't be scare of the world

Its never going to hurt you

So move on

We failed, we move on, we try again

We failed, we move on, till we get it right

WE failed, we move on, Until we can't no more

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Nice poem, Lizardo. Lots to like about it. The "We failed, we move on…" refrain is very nice. Also very nice is

"...there are many behind you
Many infront of you"

Ann inspiring piece.

Best regards,

Rick

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Rick, I really appreciete your visits here :)
I'm glad yuo liked it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

does need some editing, but i am really taken by this poem of truth...the only way we are going to get it is by going for it, being willing to fail as well as succeed....and we need to be persistent...not give up after a couple failed attempts, because that is life.


and the poem is NOT boring...it is excellent philosophy in poetic words.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for this wonderful review Jacob, I really appreciete it!

[Sami Khalil]

An outstanding poem with so much inspiration. We need those uplifting ones to keep us carry one till the finish line...An excellent one Lizardo...:)........

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Sami, for this awesome review :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....

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inspiring poem

you said it best when we were talking about the last poem I reviewed of yours

''Never say die.''



-Dream

[Lizardo]

Thank you, I felt in that mood today :)
Never say die, because we still can do whatever we want!

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sky's the limit

[Lizardo]

The universe is our limit