I'm Sorry To Say Goodbye

Um, I don't know whats this

And I'm out luck

Out of hope

But yet I keep screaming my name

I just wish to form part

Of this beautiful family

I'm sorry for everything I've done

Since now this is for real

Goodbye to all

Goodbye to all 

Heart keeps crushing

My body to the ocean

Where to scape

Where to get my sould lifted up?

What will be next....

I'm sorry for everything I've done

From the second that I changed my heart

This is goodbye to all from above

I just want 

Just want this to drift away

But I don't formed part of this beautiful family 

My heart

Doesn't belong here

Oh my time is up 

I'm sorry to say goodbye

But I'm not longer here

In the meantime 

I just want drift away

Like every other place

I don't know

What to think of

Maybe I should go

Myabe I shouldn't

Oh time

Can you heal me? 

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

My question on first read would be a question of family.

Biological or non biological groups will never have the same feel, One is safety and closeness due to blood, the other is safety and closeness out of fear and someone to have your back in a bad environment.

Your paying now for the wrong group and want to regain your place back in one family. God and you are the only ones that can heal you. But you have to recognize when and how the help is offered. Would someone kick that soap box out from under me and tell me to shut up. Now for 16 I think it was one hell of a piece. keep it up.

[Lizardo]

Thank you, but I think people are having the wrong thoughts on this one, when I meen family, like I'm not really refering to something biological because I know it's not going be the same, and here we're kind of a group, so when I mean family, I'm kind of meaning the group here in WC. Sorry if it was hard to understand :(
But thank you for your review! It really means a lot :) Like you have no Idea

[Willard Wells]

No I really was just going with first read. What is interesting there are many levels to this. My perspective was not what you meant, but someone in that type of place would maybe feel it that way due to there life and learned skills. A good piece of writing to me can often speak to many people on many levels. And for some there is no connection at all and they just go Huh.

[Lizardo]

Oh okay then, Thank you

[ANTO]

"I'm sorry to say goodbye
But I'm not longer here" - its part of being part of a family that at times we feel we are not part of that family Lizardo. It doesnt mean we aren't part of that family just that we 'feel' that way. There's a vast difference. At times we feel that we have lost touch because Life has intervened or when a natural slump has occurred but we would really have to try our damnedest to be ejected from a family in which we had such an impact, as you and your writing has had here on WC.
:)

[Lizardo]

I thank you Anto, for this great review :) and I hope you get me something for my birthday too xD

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can only heal from inside...this poem is kind of a confessional piece which shows much indecision on how to look at life...a blessing or a burden.

pretty heavy stuff...

[Laura Lynn]

Is this a riddle? Don't go, where are you going? Well, I would like to drift away as well, I feel that there is much foreboding in my life yet,