Long Gone

Long Gone

A Story by Lizardo
"

Actually, no friend is of mine is leaving me, but I feel like someone will soon.

"
I don't know why
I don't know why
I keep thinking of the bad the stuff
Am I a human or a dreamer?
Here comes another long story 
Of how I think, here we go again.

I was thinking that maybe everyone of us is sad inside because of the falls that we have or when we feel that our friends are slowly getting away from us. Maybe that is the truth, every time, a friend has to go to make new room for the next ones that are coming, but you still want to be friends. 
Then comes a thought in our minds, Guessing what the other one might think, oh how the heart breaks within in tears then lets it all out in a rage of mind. Trying to know, what is the wrong from the right when you think, that everything you do is right but what if its not... 
People change, that is one cold truth. Hearts never change, that is a warm truth 
But its just how life is going, can't complain, when you're trying to live it to the fullest 
Every human, is now thinking of something. Think of it? what they might be thinking while there are ones who are crying for the lost of their hearts there are others who are laughing and eagerly waiting for the awesome day to come, then there are others who are being exile to the darkness while others are getting out to the light. Same religious beliefs that others have, different one that humans have. Either way I still don't know, if we are dreamers or humans of our own. 
What is the great difference you might ask? Dreamers never give up and try to live their dream, while lazy humans are to lazy to do so. 
Every little things, makes us break. Every little thing, makes us have inspiration to keep us moving forward as the world advances. 
We're like watchers, slowly watching how are lives change, and how are friends tend to go out to space. 
But even then, we don't know who has the reason because we think that we all are right. 
So a friend would go and I would fall. 
So every little thing gives us away. 
So look at the world drifting around you. 
So who cares if you are right or wrong, what matters is who well you take them both into you. 
So don't be scared because your alive, religious beliefs or not, you have always someone walking at your side
So why matter? why matter to the ones who hate. 
So why feel sad? when the world is painted like a rainbow, and when I mean world, I mean your family and friends.
So why? Why why why why? Why does this story matter? 

Well it doesn't matter at all, but if you took something from it, great. if not, great then. 
I'm still very hungry.

© 2015 Lizardo


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this is the thought so common to all of us.... no one is leaving me but i feel like they are...
Awesome theme......
great job lizardo

Posted 9 Years Ago


How often these thoughts cross our minds... so very well written...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great work you did here :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


People change, that is one cold truth. Hearts never change, that is a warm truth, THAT is a fantastic line my friend! Overall, this short story is very well written, and very entertaining to read. Fantastic job Lizardo!

But I did notice one typo: "the lost of their hearts" it should be loss, not lost. Great job. Keep up the great work:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

thanks Dan, I really appreciete it :)
woah, this was really a great piece lizardo, and you do an amazing job of showing your emotions through words, whether in a poem or a story. they are both awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

thank you David :) I'm glad you liked this one
I promise I'm not going anywhere..
It's me whose afraid of losing you...

Great piece! I've felt that way almost every day..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

I have felt it too.
Thanks Aless, I really appreciete it :)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)

we all have different personalities
and as such, process situations differently from one another

however true friends remain so
in spite of all


great write


-Dream

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Words of wisdom my friend, you have really said them there.
Thanks for sharing them in my st.. read more
closed

9 Years Ago

sure thing. i have to catch up on your work friend^

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Added on March 28, 2015
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