Wither

A procesed from where you hit rock bottom and now its time to wake up from that nightmare

You know 

I'll wither

So go away now 

I'm nothing 

Lost in my own sound

Despite all my mistakes

I Feel so clear

Waiting for my dream 

Feeling so lost deep inside me

Bu you know

I'll wither 

So please don't hurt know

Because nothing 

Will bring me back down

And nothing 

Will make keep me from falling down

Despite all my fears 

I can see my thoughts 

and I feel so cold

Feel so cold 

I know 

I'll wither 

So please hear me now

Because nothing 

Will keep me now

And my sounds 

Seemed to go away

And my soul 

Is slowly fading away

While I wait 

But I'm fine

I feel fine 

I will fall 

But I'm already falling 

And now 

Now

Now 

It's time to wake up

Reviews

[Melinda McQueen]

This makes you think. It flowed with emotion.
A good soul-pouring write.
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

[W R Stowe]

sounds like a bad dream you know I wrote one "Are We Alone" check that out sometime.You may want to reexamine your write I believe there are some typos and err in word usage but it does't take anything away from the message being conveyed

Bill

[Joe_VILOT_]

the wake just to see the end our are the power given to us to see clearly;
outside and in clearly a sign of changing tides and times more than reasoning and logic whe need love and understanding to stop the hurting stop the pain lots of love and strength your way to help you through life.

[Lizardo]

Thanks so much for the awesome review with wisdom in words :)

[Jamestown]

Another great thought provoking piece and flow
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed

[Lizardo]

Thanks James, I'm glad you liked this one!

[Emily]

I just love this one!
Well done!
Keep it up!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

WAKE UP, LIZARDO!!!!!!!! Hahahahahahahahaha

Okay, sorry for that xD
I loved this!
You're finally sending me read requests again!
This was wonderful!
Thanks for sharing!
Nicely written :)

[Lizardo]

hahahahaha xD Thanks CJ I'm glad you liked this one :)
I didn't send you because you never sended me anything xD

[Cool Girl]

Well that's only because you never sent me any! xD
Totally your fault :)

[Lizardo]

No, youre fault xD

[Cool Girl]

This is going to go on forever, so I'm just going to accept the blame xD

[Joe_VILOT_]

mwwahaha both of you are hilarious :~]

[Cool Girl]

Hahaha thanks! I think...

[Lizardo]

Trust me, we have a lot of conversations like these all the time xD

[Cool Girl]

Yep, that's true! We're like twins xD

[Lizardo]

Brother-Twin-crazies persons you would probably see xD

[Cool Girl]

That's the brief summary of us! xD