Lost in the Sky

I'm so sorry..

Tears of water drop on 

Flames of power go on 

Feel the heat of the moment now

When our worlds come crumbling down

I felt the clouds drowning me

As those white colors turned to pitched black skies

I fell down to earth, covered in ash as the wind flew on my eyes

Thunder started to rumble through earth 

And I was lost all the way back down

Tides of ocean strike shore 

Crystals eyes form 

Can't hold on for long

One knee on the ground

One leg up high

One hand down

One hand up high 

I see waves of life

Waves of sound and waves of time

Igniting light upon a beacon of hope

As bright as the sun, I see light I see Now

Lost in the sky of silver stones

Hopeless wandering through earth's core

But I know

I keep going, but my feet can't hold on for long

I see light, while darkness sorrounds my body

I see it clear

Feel the song of your heart

Every power that makes

your body walk through earth

You walk

You eat

You will see

Earth unfolding upon your crystal eyes

Darkness may win

But light is always one step ahead

Keep that in your mind

Don't make those crystals eyes 

Cry for this hopeless world

Instead

Hope for its best

Dream for its best

Don't cry for this

It will go all...

It will drift away

Like the wind carrying leafs through the air...

so don't cry 

Don't feel hopeless 

Because darkness never wins, and you are 

You are a special human.

Reviews

[Tania]

"It will drift away
Like the wind carrying leafs through the air...
so don't cry 
Don't feel hopeless 
Because darkness never wins, and you are 
You are a special human."
Beautiful words written...
Love It

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Another wonderful write.... the end was just amazing....

[AaronFreitas]

This is a very emotional piece and I am glad you got it out and shared with us. You express your feelings beautifully in this poem... very good job. Change leafs to leaves.... great job Lizardo and glad to see you on here!

[Lizardo]

I've had a lot of homework and tests lately so thats why I haven't got out a good piece or review poems. Thank you so much Aaron! I'm glad you liked this one

[Cool Girl]

I feel like that every single day...
I cry too much, but I need to.
It just feels right somehow..
I'm also so terribly sorry,
I don't know why, but I am

I like you're poem..
It's really nice

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much !

[Cool Girl]

Youre welcome!

[kkellyn]

Waouh amazing piece of writing!

[Lizardo]

Thank you!

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

I like the detailed imagery displayed all through the poem. I also like the message of hope and the concept of never giving up.


I love these lines:
Darkness may win
But light is always one step ahead

Very good poem

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Jamestown]

You are absolutely amazing! This piece has it all!
Imagery, elements, word play, hope and kindness,
fantastic, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

Thanks James! Sorry I haven't review your amazing writing too, I have too much homework and vacation is coming close, so you can expect a lot of reviews from me :)
Thanks for this awesome Review!