Lost in the Sky

I'm so sorry..

Tears of water drop on 

Flames of power go on 

Feel the heat of the moment now

When our worlds come crumbling down

I felt the clouds drowning me

As those white colors turned to pitched black skies

I fell down to earth, covered in ash as the wind flew on my eyes

Thunder started to rumble through earth 

And I was lost all the way back down

Tides of ocean strike shore 

Crystals eyes form 

Can't hold on for long

One knee on the ground

One leg up high

One hand down

One hand up high 

I see waves of life

Waves of sound and waves of time

Igniting light upon a beacon of hope

As bright as the sun, I see light I see Now

Lost in the sky of silver stones

Hopeless wandering through earth's core

But I know

I keep going, but my feet can't hold on for long

I see light, while darkness sorrounds my body

I see it clear

Feel the song of your heart

Every power that makes

your body walk through earth

You walk

You eat

You will see

Earth unfolding upon your crystal eyes

Darkness may win

But light is always one step ahead

Keep that in your mind

Don't make those crystals eyes 

Cry for this hopeless world

Instead

Hope for its best

Dream for its best

Don't cry for this

It will go all...

It will drift away

Like the wind carrying leafs through the air...

so don't cry 

Don't feel hopeless 

Because darkness never wins, and you are 

You are a special human.

Reviews

[Daisygirl]

I love the turn around at the end.

[Chris]

Excellent piece, Lizardo.
Interesting insight into the changing reality.

[jonah]

hey hey Lizardo! great imagery you got here :) the title still makes me wonder though. "Lost in The Sky" hmmmm were you thinking about the sky like...our sky up there or further than that? because as far as i know you're really interested in the outer space haha. great message of hope. only that i feel that the words "crystal eyes" were repeated in a way that makes the words loses its power. but, that's just my opinion, though. great write :)

[DoormanDan]

The imagery and uplifting atmosphere in this piece is absolutely fantastic. I loved every single last line of this poem! I'd say that this is your best poem so far Lizardo! Keep up the magic :)

[Amber Lily]

In the sky anything can happen, sometimes we all need to take the trip to be able to bare whatever reality throws at us. Possibilities are endless in the sky, and maybe there we can find hope. A great dreamful write :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

That was most astoundingly amazing. A fight for life and living, not just surviving. A knowing that life can pull you and push you back and make you fall sometimes, but you are strong enough to stand up and keep going and go up, way up.

"Tides of ocean strike shore
Crystals eyes form
Can't hold on for long
One knee on the ground
One leg up high
One hand down
One hand up high"
That was awesome. It sounded like the protagonist was like stuck in a sinking sand, one part reading to give in, but the other part reaching for a branch to get out.

[Ana B.]

A sad and raw but powerful write :) Stunning writing

[closed]

the hope at the end ties up a very reflective piece

alot of it seems to be about transcendence

and the power of the spirit to triunph over hardship


4 stars



*Dream

[Emily]

Lovely poem!!
Well done!!

[Daisy]

wow it's really a wonderful thing to say
Don't cry for the hopeless world instead hope for it's best
Great words to say
Wonderful poem