You Can Know

You can know, what you believe to be

How do I believe in myself?

When everything I do best is fail

Fail fail fail fail and Fail

Like climbming a mountain

Thats life and your dreams

When you fall or when you keep going

The stars seemed to be beautiful

From up there

While I'm just here 

Waiting to hitch a ride

Who is going to help me?

Who is going to help me

When I can't find love or success

On earth there are sounds

That sorround it through waves of life

You can know what you know 

And everything you've seen

Is just life 

Me and hope

Are watching-Are waiting for the train

To arrive, I'm still here

When tides rock me out of orbit

As the waves drown me underwater

Burning myself in the fire

Or sinkind underground,  I don't know

I don't know 

Here comes another boring poem

Of my thoughts and my tragic life

You never know 

What's going to happen next

So Keep your head up 

On earth their are sounds

That come like waves of life

While I'm being kick out of earth

because I don't belong here. 

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

I liked it a lot!
You don't send me read requests anymore :(

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thoughts in poems are not boring if they are real...these doubts are real...very real...

and you do belong...do not imagine that is not true.

really good piece...needs some editing...but is a reflection of how most of us feel at times.

jacob