The Drumer

The Drumer

A Poem by Lizardo
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I don't know, I just got the inspiration

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Once a time
There was a boy
Who dreamed of becoming
A world famous human

Hi played with his drums
All day and night
Going to Jazz clubs
He quickly became
A sensation to the whole wide world

As he grew older
He became stronger
Playing his drums in stadiums of light

Once came a person
A man with the same age as him
The man proposed one battle
Who ever wins
Is the strongest

The Drumer accepted
He practiced all day
Dripping blood from his hands
Playing the drums
Jazz clubs all over the world
Becoming stronger
Once a life time
Always a lived life

Then came the day 
Jazz echoing through the halls
Each step provided one that shook earth
Both of the heavy weights came
Entering the stadium
All eyes on them
All the world on them
Everything
From hates to loved ones
Paying close attention

They started playing
The sound echoing through the stadium
One faster than the other
The other one faster
Quickly hurting his hand
The drumer drop blood from his hands
While the other didn't stop playing
Although he was also dripping blood

They both stopped
One fell to the floor
While the drumer stayed up 
His hands full of blood
Looking at everyone
As the applauses came
He made a gesture for them to stop
He grabbed his competitors hand
Lifted hum up
Grabbed him from his hand
And lifted up too
Applauses rose to the sky
The stadium of light shine through the night

In that moment
The star went supernova
Yes indeed, the stadium of light was a star.

© 2015 Lizardo


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sweet supernova
rythmic with vodka
or to salsa beat
chachacha!!!
music to ma ears
caus the drummers got no fear :8)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Well, thats another way of seeing the poem
I love this review xD Thanks for it!
Joe_VILOT_

9 Years Ago

any time sis
That is an awesome piece Lizardo. At some point in life I think everyone wants to be a star in one way or another... for me I wanted to be a rock singer!!! haha awesome work... also two m's on drummer. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Missed that one xD
Thanks Aaron! I'm glad you liked this one
AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

No problem... thats what friends are for!
I love this! It's such a great little story! I love how you used a metaphor in the last stanza :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

I guess that would be a nice twist :)
Thank you so much Aless, I'm glad you liked it!
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You're welcome, Lizardo!

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Added on March 1, 2015
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