Infinity in the world

The world is strange...

Open up your mind

See the world around you

What do you see? what do you see?

Another death comes out

Nobody can escape infinity

It goes and goes forever

How to escape something like this?

The universe at a large scale

looks like the world

In someway its in peace

Everything looks to little around their

I wonder what the universe is becoming

Here comes another wave

Hop one or get out of here

Waves will rock you out

Or hit you again

The borders make us fade

The world is one in my mind

These borders make us fade

Oh we're gonna help around here

Death knocks on our door

What to do? what to do?

I've lived a short life

What to do, what to do?

Here Hope at your backyard

Yelling your name

Well, I'm going to say

That time is moving forward

Time will change

Every second one older

Ever second one past

Hear the birds sing

Hear the world yell

What do you hear?

What do you hear?

What do you hear?

God, Here comes another day

In life

Why are these days going so quick?

Does time want us gone now?

We're gonna dream tonight

Ghost come haunting us

Planning how to scare us now

Shadows are advancing towards you

Hold on now

Just one "Now" more...

At the end you'll see light

Either way

At the end you'll see light

Either way

You'll se light

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I like how you ask these questions about the world. You really explore why we live, what it means to be alive, and why the things we know inevitably fade. I like your stanza where you question god and ask "Why are these days going so quick?/Does time want us gone now?" Those are difficult questions to answer, but you are brave for asking them at such a young age.

I agree with your last stanza about seeing the light at the end. There is light at the end. However, I think that some of that life lives with us in the world before we leave. We can see it if we look and listen closely. Based on this poem, I think you are on the right path.

[Lizardo]

Wow thank you so much Clockwork for this wonderful review you have giving me, I'm blessed by seeing such display of thoughts in your review.
Thank you so much for your words full of wisdom, I really appreciete it

[Clockwork]

You're welcome Lizardo. Thank you for sharing your poem.

[Sami Khalil]

All are faves. I can't pick one. Creative and becoming...:)................

[Lizardo]

Thanks Sami for this wonderful review of yours! I appreciete it a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[Cool Girl]

Youre being creative again xD
The world is indeed very strange..
I think of life as a bunch of stages!
I am currently in my first stage, but when I'm in Heaven, I'll be in my second.
The stages just keep on getting better and better as you pass through them.
All those "dead" ones are truly not dead! They just proceeded to another stage before we did..

(I hope that makes sense) xD

[Lizardo]

Thank you Aless! (And yes it did make sense xD)

[Cool Girl]

Good! You're welcome xD