New

New

A Poem by Lizardo
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New things, New poem..

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Once a night upon the sky
Screaming owls come from my back
I got scared of those cries for help
Twice a day on earth
Ants came crawling on my toes
In a tiptoe, I had to walk
From my legs that felt like stones

When we walk between haven and earth
Our legs need to rest
Every day we walk forward
Without even knowing it

My heart sinks to death
When I smell fear close to me
I can't walk or move
When I froze

Sometimes we want to find
What's infront of us
If we could see
Beauty on everything

But we hold on
Hold on to fear

Each night there's a day
A day on the night
When I feel gravity 
Sucking me to an endless dream

Try to hold on from it
As my legs turn to steel
Iit hurts when I walk
But yet I keep going

© 2015 Lizardo


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Its truly hard to think of you as a 15 year old when you write stuff like this man. Nice work! brilliant use of original metaphors

Posted 9 Years Ago


Some believe the many troubles and countless obstructions we face in everyday life are meant to either keep us from our true destiny or motivate us to fully appreciate that role, once (or if) we finally assume it.
Your poem, Lizardo, brings these notions to mind.
No matter the physical or emotional price, what choice do we have but to keep trudging on?
"New" is a thoughtful and thought-provoking offering.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome work Lizardo. It always amazes me that you are still young but such a beautiful mind. Keep up the good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aaron, I'm glad you liked it!
Your wisdom goes far beyond your age young man and "fear" is our greatest enemy of all. Unfortunately we don't seem to fear what should be feared,Eternal Damnation being cast into the lake of fire to have torment for an eternity. Oh yea! Nice poem good insight

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this one
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

your very welcome
Every walk through life is a struggle, few have it easy. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

That is very true, thank you so much for your review
The last stanza is my favorite! The journey of life truly never ends, it just has multiple stages..
Your poem was so well written and I think this is my new favorite from you! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Don't have doubts..
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Fine then, I wont
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Good! I'm proud of you :)
very surreal lizardo
the mystical reality like quality is really kool too

a great new start

-Dream

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Literary, I really appreciete your review here :)
closed

9 Years Ago

sure thing
wow...another great read.... beautiful!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anurag! I'm glad you liked this one
This is fantastic friend, simply great! I enjoyed every word, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Friend!

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