By Far

Truth and happiness

Its fun to try

And be the best

Bullets rain from the sky

Hitting every part of me

We crave for truth

But we don't know

That we had it in front of us

The whole time

And all of this thoughts

Come out of the five sences

And all I blame are my 

Miss opportunities

Faults and happiness in my life

I wonder what would be of me

If I took them all 

By far 

Happiness is happy

And the sky is blue

Nothing changes 

Miss oportunities

Rain from the sky

Showing me worlds

That could have been

But I am like I'm right now

So everything goes in a fun ride

We crave for truth

You need to fine the fun ride of life

Who cares about the problems?

Why not care of happiness?

Trying to impress people

Who you don't even know

I don't blame you

I blame society and its pression

Upon us

We carry heavy worlds

You need to find

Truuuuuuuuuuth

Where theres truth

There's happiness

Floating everywhere

Truuuuuuuuuuuuth

Truuuuuuuuuuuuuuth

Where theres truth

There's happines

Floating everywhere in my world

Reviews

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Great work!
Well done!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[DoormanDan]

Every word in this poem you've written is true, powerful, and inspirational Lizardo! I really mean it when I say that I have not seen another poem set up like this one before. You keep on branching out with every piece you write, an that's good for you. Keep it up! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for this wonderful review Dan! I'm glad you liked it
Although sometimes Truth can hurt, but it's better knowing the truth than living your life as a lie

[DoormanDan]

Couldnt have said it better myself :)

[Cool Girl]

Truth.. Sadly, it can be very hard to find. People tell lies, so many that we can never determine truth. Wonderful poem, my friend. You're talent amazes me..

[Lizardo]

That is very true...
Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome, Lizardo :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting puzzle of truth...and yes, most often it is right in front of us, we just don't see it, or want to see it.

[Lizardo]

It is hidden from our eyes, but we are the ones who make a puzzle and hid it somewhere because sometimes the truth hurts, but its better knowing the truth than living a fantasy world

[Jamestown]

This piece is killer friend! Great set up and delivery. Very creative and lots
of truth! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Check out, sweet sounds I posted earlier, thanks again!

[Lizardo]

I will James, thank you so much!