I'm So Sorry

You gotta fight up

You gotta get down

Rain falling on your own

Try to go up or try to down

Either way its to close

Sometimes

There's not time to think

Just act like act

So you have to fight up

Gotta get down

From the bottom comes your own

Better be great

Then be like the rest

Think of all your choices

There's a lot of time here and there

Like thunder love comes again

Once you love

Once you don't

Maybe it breaks

Or gets away on its own

Gotta get up

And feel good

Either way

You have to feel good

Life is full Gold

Sometines you act

Without thinking it twice

Life is hard

Doesn't seem like it is

One day your up

The next you fall

Oh one day 

You'll be up

One day

The future is close

Hear the chat of the people

The future lingers close

You have to get up

And fight on your own

Love for what is good

Try to go up

Never go down

'Cause if you do

You'll sink down

(Lost in your thoughts)

I'm So sorry

For everything

That I've done

I'm so sorry

For being like I am

I'm so sorry

Just can't think things twice

I just act

My thoughts come

Like reflexes of my own

Oh I'm so sorry

I'm so sorry

I'm So Sorry

Reviews

[Ashley]

I really like the part "the future is close." It makes me realize that I am now in the future because when I started writing this review it is the past. There can be no such thing a now because when you say now it has already past (utterance and deitic). Overall, a great piece! And do not be sorry- you are you and do change because I love the person you are today and the person you were and the person you will become no matter what!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Ashley]

Read my post Lizardito!!

[Lizardo]

I knew it was you !! Fine I will right now

[Jamestown]

This is a really cool piece all together, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much James, I'm glad you liked it!

[closed]

This is a great piece for its sentiment

you don't have to be sorry for anything

you haven't done anything but be who you are

and for that you never have to apologize

just reinvent yourself, like great artists do

be stronger than yesterday

and outrun tmw


-Dream

[Lizardo]

Ah, such words of wisdom, you are appreciete friend :)
I decided to write this one in another perspective, but you are right.
If you haven't done anything wrong, why apologyze?

[closed]

channel your sorrow into your pen
and turn in inward

and you'll be better than ever before

invincible

[Cool Girl]

All of us are always sorry for something. I'll never truly understand what you are sorry for, but that doesn't matter. You're poem is absolutely wonderful, and I'm sorry that my reviews are never long. I never know what to say about your writing. It touches me somehow, brings back memories or emotions. I'm so sorry, I'm so very sorry. I am truly very sorry..for everything..

[Lizardo]

I had the idea from one the imagine dragon's new song (I got smoke and mirrors already)
I decided to write this one in another perspective

[Cool Girl]

Well, I'm glad you aren't sad then. I like imagine dragons! :)

[Lizardo]

They're a good band!

[Cool Girl]

Yes indeed!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

This was really good. I like the creative choice to use different fonts and outlining. Fantastic piece!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we will always feel sorry for something...but acting on instant, without thinking twice...
it is a reflex that is totally human...

lost of soul in this piece.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Jacob, I'm glad you liked this one