The Fall

Maybe I'm crazy

Maybe I'm thinking

Just watching the world ending

Like any other day 

So simple like water

A word can make you fall

Anything can make us fall

Maybe I'm broken

Maybe I'm not

I should of told you before there was time

Breaking myself down 

Falling down 

 all of those things

Are pieces of Glass

Do you know?

How much I feel bad

Everthing comes falling down

Black and white

My eyes can see

I'm breaking down

I'm falling down

Sinking down

There was a time

When I was going up

But now all I do

Is fall down

Every little thing

Makes me fall

I'm falling down

Everything is breaking

I'm falling down

So Save me 

Before I fall down

I beg you please

So save me

Before I fall down

I'm on my knees for you

So save me 

Before I go home

Change me before I fall

I'm lost in my mind

Author's Note

We sometimes feel like were falling down and everything is going with us. I felt like that a lot of times and I still do, but I try to keep my chin up and don't let that afect me.
Falling down and everything going with us down, like the world is ending and you can't describe how you feel...
I felt like that a lot of times, and sometimes, I just want somebody who can catch me and carry up the hill again.

Reviews

[Lavender Soya]

Creative presentation, I felt the emotion on this one. It's quite moving. Well done! :-)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Lavender! Could you do me a favor and read my new poem? It's called: We used to wait, if you're interested :)

[Lavender Soya]

Sure, I would love too. :-) Never hesitate to send me read requests. I always read them, it may take some time though but I still manage.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Genuine feelings my friend presented in a beautiful way....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much anurag!

[Daisy]

wow you remind me of a song i like saying am drowning please save me................ wonderful

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Emily]

I like how the word are all over the place!
Lovely meaning!
Keep it up!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Wow I really liked our drifting the way u described it and the way you wrote it an mind blowing poem..... really enjoyed reading it :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much friend, I'm glad you liked it

[Cool Girl]

Lizardo, I absolutely loved this! I totally understand how you felt when writing this, and I do hope you'll be happier! Cheer up, my friend! Thanks for sharing:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Aless! I'm glad you liked it

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!!

[Leviathus Fortes]

We'd all love someone to catch us but we can only carry ourselves.

It is that spirit, that drive, inside that whispers in our ears:

"Don't give up"
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I could not image what I would be if I gave in to this feeling. I see it as someone testing my resolve.
Perhaps readying me for something greater than I ever thought I could have in my life.

[Lizardo]

That is very true Leviathus, thank you so much for your wonderful review!

[Jamestown]

Great job! This is a great descriptive piece about feeling like everything is out
of control, I think you wrote this very well,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much friend! I'm glad you like it