Don't Go Crying

Dont cry my friends, the world out there maybe hard, but we have friends and family who we can coun't on

Don't go crying

From your problems

This is our world

Don't feel sad

From your life

This was a gift for us

From Above Earth

Donw earth and in between

The Dawn of time

Sinks a man down

At the end of time

We'll be Underground

Listen to the world

It is telling you right now

How to work your way

Through this jungle of thought

Don't cry 

From your problems

This our world

Don't feel down

Underground

Get up 

Keep moving on your own

Author's Note

The Idea of the usage of colors, was from my friend THE RESILIENT ONE.
I hope you like this poem! (I'm kind of changin my style in the poem)

Reviews

[jonah]

hey, Lizardo! I just saw this poem while reading the description on Liber8 lol. interesting use of colors you put here. also cool picture :)) life's harsh, but that what makes us grow, right? great message of bravery you got there. but I'm thinking maybe it should've been 'dont go crying' at the first line of the last stanza. just my opinion though. keep it up!

[Lizardo]

Thats a pretty good Idea Jonah! and thanks for the review friend :)

[jonah]

no problem :)

[Emily]

Lovely write!
Well done!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Melissa Padilla]

Paramore everywhere :')
I enjoy reading your stuff, it really interesting. You have very deep thoughts :D Nice work
!

[Lizardo]

Ah thanks you mely, coming from you, it really means a lot :)
Para more everywhere xD

[DoormanDan]

The color usage is excellent, it really adds to the poem. I got a whole "Live life with no regrets" feeling from this poem. You've delivered the message perfectly, for this is one very inspirational and positive poem. Keep bettering yourself! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan! I'm glad you liked it :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Really good one... and good thoughts ....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Daisy]

great thought to share but soooo difficult to act upon....... good job...

[Lavender Soya]

Hello there,

Here are my favorite lines:

How to work your way
Through this jungle of thought

Awesome presentation! Your perseverance and hard work is evident in your poems. I see a lot of potential in you lad. Keep them coming! Enjoy your day.

Best,
Lavender Soya

[Cool Girl]

Hey! You used colors this time xD
More stuff inspired by Paramore I'm guessing? Lol
I really really liked it! I love the variety:)

[Lizardo]

Probably xD
Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

Haha! You're welcome:(

[Lizardo]

what wrong?

[Cool Girl]

Sorry, meant to write a smiley face xD

[Lizardo]

hahaha mistakes, mistakes everywhere xD

[Jamestown]

My friend for such a young man, you are so inspiring with your words, this is fantastic
you should be happy with this piece, keep up the awesome work, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much James, I'm glad you liked it and thank you for your comment !