Ain't it Fun

Ain't it Fun

A Poem by Lizardo
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Hear us out
Hear us now
We have something to say now
Hear us out
Listen now
We have words writen down
Dont sit there ignoring us
Would it be fun if we talk like adults?

Ain't it fun
The world that we live in now
Ain't it fun
There are dreams flying around my house
Just look up the sky
Hear us now, hear us now

I always wonder
If a perfect life would make us strong?
Every fall
Every win
Everything
Makes us stronger, one foot on perfection
Would it be fun, to live a perfect life?
Hear us now, We have something to say

Would it be fun
To afront reality itself
To suffer and feel the pain
To understand what our friends are going through
To feel happy or sad
Would it be fun...
To just be like how we are
Nothing changing us
No, theres nothing changing us
Watch from your window now
Watch reality
In the News
Manipulated or right
Reality is just outside
Understand the pain

Ain't it fun
To live a life
To fight for whats right
To have friends
Ain't it fun
To feel happy 
To dream 
What wrong it there?
Hear us now
We have something to say
Don't put tape on our mouths
We have something say
Fear is consuming us
Great enemy of mine
Don't feel scare my friend

Ain't it fun
Reality is a game
Don't look to the wrong
Ain't it fun, Ain't it fun
The world is here and there
Space and time are up and down
Ain't it fun, Ain't it fun
to fight for your dreams
To never give up

Ain't it fun....

© 2015 Lizardo


Author's Note

Lizardo
I put some creativity to my work, I hope it turned out well

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I like the wit in this Lizardo. It is tongue-in-cheek but also carries serious philosophical queries (reality is a game - a hot topic in many fields where we are thought to be living in a SIM world).
I like the experimental use of the text font and colours - I have to say that I like it better than the ones that had the text all over the shop (and for good reason), but thats just because Im a neat freak ;).
Yeah, anyway , the multicolours adds to that 'fun' aspect. I really liked this part -
"Ain't it fun
The world that we live in now
Ain't it fun
There are dreams flying around my house" - a pure Lizardo-ism - sorry if you dont like being an 'ism' I will withdraw that if you wish but I mean it in homage to your brilliant mind.
Good one my friend. :))

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lizardo

10 Years Ago

hahaha Don't worry ANTO, I'm happy your back :')
I like the Lizardo-ism thing, and thank you.. read more
ANTO

10 Years Ago

Change is good. Im too conservative in that regard - fair play to you my friend and thanks - for all.. read more
Lizardo

10 Years Ago

You're welcome ANTO :), you're welcome



Reviews

Interesting presentation. Yes, it turned out well. The rhythm is quite engaging. Furthermore, I can sense a great message. Bravo! Keep on writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lizardo

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by here
Lavender Soya

10 Years Ago

My pleasure. :-)
I would say it turned out very well. This is definately different than your usual writing. What you did with the font really makes the poem more energetic, and the message it delivers is one that this world needs to hear more often. All in all, you have done fantastically with this piece. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lizardo

10 Years Ago

It's true, ah, such an awesome band!
DoormanDan

10 Years Ago

they are good, but although i like their new stuff, i liked them more back when they released materi.. read more
Lizardo

10 Years Ago

True! and also, We were born for this
Life is not a bed of roses where every one just has fun.. Life has its share of thorns and prickly patches that have to be faced with wisdom. Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lizardo

10 Years Ago

True, but most of the people don't recured to wisdom which is really sad
Thank you so much Va.. read more
Your poems have improved I must say. Keep up the good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lizardo

10 Years Ago

I decided to add a little mor creativity and just enjoy the flow of the poem.
Thank you so mu.. read more
Terrence Chang

10 Years Ago

Exactly let it flow and words will come naturally. That's the every poem's reality
It is fun for just a some people.... I think if people get to know the fun in this all... all problems will go away...
Wonderful concept and style..... great poem keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lizardo

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! You are right, they would go away
It is very fun! xD
Loved this so much:) thanks for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lizardo

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

You're welcome:)

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