Pyramid

A pyramid of order

We have seen

What lies beyond our eyes

I have seen love 

In ways that you'll never understand

Someday

We'll see stars 

Order and Disorder

Orden, lets make order

For the good and the bad

Just prove your point

I have seen

Earth in three dimentions

We have seen Love

In words you'll never understand

Unless

One of these days

You'll see a pyramid

That lais in your eyes and nose

A pyramid so strong 

Like Keops

Represeting order and love

I've heard

Symphonys made in earth

You have seen what reality is

We believe what we see 

Just one more

Word it takes

To make us fall down

Oh God....

Just one word

It takes 

For us to go get up

Follow what your way

Reflections in the sky

Cause doubts in your mind

Remember, what you are

A pyramid that shows

Every stage of thought

A pyramid

So strong 

It carries order and love

Reviews

[J. K. Beach]

L... Sorry it took me awhile to visit with your work, but I'm glad I did. Your words, in this piece, flow and cascade down to the final stanza where you remind us that, while we may rise and fall repeatedly, there are good thoughts and good emotions and good people that guide us and provide the supporting pyramid that always will carry the love and order in our lives... well penned.

Second stanza, fourth line... Is "Orden" a name or did you mean to write order again?

Regards, JKB

[Lizardo]

order, it was order.
Thank you so much for this review J.K. I'm glad you liked my poem :)

[Valentine]

When a person falls in love, they are seeing live like in a dream that they are afraid of waking up from. Valentine

[Lizardo]

That is true, Thank you so much for your review Valentine!

[Daisy]

great words..... One word it takes for us to get up and one words it takes to make us fall......
It's wonderful

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think we as poets do hear symphonies and see dimensions that others choose not to look at ....the pyramid of the poet's mind...that triangular cube of thought.

[Lizardo]

It is true, because we mostly think about all of the aspects of life and order them.
Thank you for your review jacob!

[Cool Girl]

A very thought out poem..
Well done, my friend!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Aless, I'm glad you liked it!

[Cool Girl]

That's what you always say xD
You're welcome:)