Now that I think of it.....

Well here we are again

Thinking about us

In a world that is sad

Well, I can't say nothing more

Maybe a goodbye would be good

You wanted to find love

Go find it

That's what I'm hoping for

I'll see you when I grow up

You'll be really happy 

There is something

Bothering me

Althought I don't know

What really is

I feel like something was taken from me

Go live your life 

You are a wonderful person

That's what I'm counting on

You'll be really happy

Oh Dear, I know you will

The day is blue and yellow 

Although I feel my life  

In black and white, my best friend

You know how to make me happy

Even When I'm sad

If you knew how much 

Love has made me suffer, you would understand my pain...

I've become, so lost and sad

One day 

I will see you

You'll be happy

I thought of leaving

But I can't leave you now

Nobody can replace you 

Maybe tomorrow 

I will stop feeling so bad

Go and make new friends

That's what I'm counting on

Oh my dear friend

This is not a goodbye

I just can leave my friends here in WC

They thought more than my friends here in el salvador

One day 

I came to this site

Hoping for the best of my writes

Well look at me now

I'm not half as good as you

But I feel so damn happy for you

Find your light my friend

That's what I'm counting on

I know this is not the end

No, I'm not leaving

Not making those mistakes again

The truth is 

I have a lot of wonderful friends here

And I can't leave them because of my sadness

All of you help me be happy again

Oh my dear friend

This is poem is really long xD

I still feel really sick

And don't know when I'm going to good again

But I want write this for you

And to all my friends

Just to tell you all

How happy I've felt when I'm here

Now my friend

Be happy 

Just be happy

Be Happy.....

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

This is yet another beautiful and emotionally charged poem. It really reminded me of how i felt when I had to move away from my friends. You have done an awesome job with this poem, and like CG said, hope you feel better :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan! really thank you :)

[Cool Girl]

If you're happy, I'm happy:) thanks for being my bestie, Lizardo!
I will grow up and be happy (I hope) I pray that you'll be happy too..
Best wishes, and feel better!

Sincerely,

- C.G.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome! I feel.. odd today..

[W R Stowe]

Kid you choked me up with this,Pray this is a creation and not reality.I enjoy your young wisdom and fresh eyes of review.Take the best of care and God bless.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for the amazing review Stowe :)
To you too, God bless you

[W R Stowe]

Thank you and your welcome

[Marie]

We will be happy if you are happy...

[Lizardo]

hmmm maybe you are right Marie..