Life is a long time

This boat floats

By the tides

Resting in two dark moons

They turned the flower into fire

Maybe they'll see every call they heard

Overtime we build cities and transportation

As a matter fact I still remember you

You know it starts pretty bad

But it all finishes good

With the water and reflections

Forming over the moon

And the sun showing colors

I feel your touch even though you're far away

Look at your surroundinds

You know it stars really bad

And it ends up good

Just don't worry

Feel the winter come

It feels like summer

But winter

Makes me remember

The time that I met you

Life is a long time

Between my thoughts and you

I can't stop thinkin about you

Life is a long time

Just remember me when I'm gone

You know it starts really bad

And it ends up really good

Just remember me

We'll meet someday

I know that 

Feel happy my friend

I will someday be over there

Just feel happy

I will arrived

And we will play

Like animals

You know it

I know it

Just remember me in your thoughts

Life is a long time my friend

I have a lot of time

You know it

You know that someday we will meet

You know everything starts really bad

And then depression comes and makes it all bad

Just remember

Life is hard

But that hardened face from it

Is as happy as you

Just remember

I will arrive

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

if your about you is true you are 15 yrs old!! good for you!! too many your age find expression in anger, bullying, and too many destructive behaviors to mention (you know them i am sure)
you start with some fine metaphors .. the tides, oceans, moons and boats will never cease to inspire creative endeavors ... i think you can trim this one a bit and say what you say more powerfully (but i tend to be minimalist so remember its just an opinion ;) ..
there are some minor editing issues i am sure if you read through a couple more times you will find them ... your theme that everything starts bad is dripping with tragedy .. but the resounding answer that things get better speaks to my optimistic and sometimes foolish old heart .. enjoyed reading .. thank you for sharing!
E.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for your kind review! I'm glad you liked it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

much in life starts out badly, but if we hang in there, stick with it...it can turn to good...including relationships....

nicely written, a heartfelt piece.

life is long time...and over that long time we learn so much about ourselves and others which helps to turn the bad to good.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Jacob, I'm glad you liked it!

[Cool Girl]

Reading this almost made me cry... Very meaningful words, Lizardo. Listen to the song "My Heart Will Go On" it reminds me of this poem:)

[Lizardo]

I will, and thank you so much! :) I wrote with all my heart
You should hear: Life is a long time by Los campesinos!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:) okay, I'll listen to it!