The Highway, Underwater And the Difference

A highway to your dreams

Swimming into the water

Lonely and lost

But at the end theres light

Down there, I can see light

Oh sweet love

Sink me down again

I did what you asked

Now I'm here left behind

With sorrow and honor at the edge

I'll think of you

The thing that made me fall

But yet again

You made believe again

Throw away your dispairs

Went after you in a race

You gave me a glimpse of what love means

Now I'm still trying to find where your temple is

Beautiful highway

You connect the time

Different types of cars pass on by

You don't care whose going in the car

You just want to make them go forward

Behing there comes a car

Ramping through the highway

A bloody car 

Trying to make the highway fall

The Wind blows through my hair

This bones can't handle it

The decisions after them

Hear the sound of them talking

you pay way to much attention at them

So just look at the sun

Theres a highway to the moon

Run your car as fast as you can

The light is scaping there

You don't have much time

your dreams are scaping now

It's now or never my great friend

Drive your car to the highway

Before the ramping car destroys it

It's now or never

This is your time my friend

Don't worry about whats behind

Behing doesn't matter now

Forward is what you look up to now

Go, go find your dreams

I'm still swimming underwater

Finding my light

Darkness my swallow us

But we are own beacon 

Maybe we may get attacked

Just don't fall on your knees my friend

Remember that they can win

We're going after what we want

Everyone has a different way

Of finding their light

Some underground and some in the sky

Some have different ways to be happy

And some just like to be bad

And here I come

With my different styles

With my thoughts

Underwater or in the sky

Time is the same on each way

Just don't fall

All of us have a different way of being happy

Some underground and some in the sky

Some have beacons and some are trying to find theirs

Trying to find yourself

When you already know what you are

Everyone is different

A long highway it is

But its not impossible 

Everyone has different ways

Of being who they are

Reviews

[Ana B.]

everyone is different yet so alike......a very pationate and strong write :) Very lovely

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Ana! I'm glad you liked it :)

[Valentine]

I get most out of the first two groupings, then I am lost. You young people seem to speak a different language than I am used to. Valentine

[Lizardo]

We speak the same just with different words :)

[Valentine]

Perhaps you are right!! Kathie

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"Everyone is different
A long highway it is
But its not impossible
Everyone has different ways
Of being who they are"
Nicely summed up.... good one

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Anurag, I'm glad you liked it!

[AaronFreitas]

Very good work Lizardo! I really like the way you close the poem with "everyone is different, a long highway it is. But it's not impossible, everyone has different ways of being who they are." That statement is so true. Awesome work

[Lizardo]

thank you so much Aaron! I'm glad you liked it :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like all the sentiment in this....but would suggest some shortening...maybe tightening up a bit, could still keep what needs to be ....sometimes length can lessen the impact...just thoughts.

[Lizardo]

Alright Jacob, I'll try to fix it.
Thank you so much

[Jamestown]

Great job, you make a very valid point, different strokes for different folks in
the search for happiness, thanks for sharing.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for your kind review!

[Daisy]

yup its true everyone is different and have different ways to find happiness....... so first learn what you are...... wonderful concept and poem great job

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Daisy, I'm glad you liked it :)

[Cool Girl]

Nothing is impossible! Reminds me of that picture in your photos on your profile! Nice job, Lizardo! I loved it:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Aless, I'm glad you liked it!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome..