When the light leaves, Dark sees

A Story by Lizardo

A story about the title..

I was walking with my sweater and coat in Antarctica, it was beginning to be dusk, snow flakes fell before my eyes and a sense of coldness hitted my through my body.

“When the light leaves” My head was thinking “Then the dark sees” As a matter of fact, I felt really sad. Everything was starting to get... really... cold.....

No one was walking with me...the darkness was about to again in my house… I tried to run, but I fell down trying too.

“When the light leaves” The sun was starting to go down

“Then the dark sees” The moon was coming from the other end, with all its might and light shinning through the arctic floor.

I cough, started to think about every defeat in my life and everything that makes me fall down. The pain that love had brought me, has gotten me to become cold like Antarctica itself, there’s nobody walking with me before the sun goes down.

Violet rays, The sun was going down, half of the sun going to who knows where

Darkness was seeing again in my land, I felt the sweet blanket from it.

“Time to go” I thought

“Again and again”

As I walked each step, the sun was going down and darkness was rising. I felt cold and wanted to cry.

“When the light leaves and the dark sees” I thought

Darkness rose to the sky with the last rays of hope form the sun were fading away…

My heart started to sink down… the only sound were my footsteps in the snow and the snow storm coming towards my home or so I thought that was my home…

“When the light leaves, then the dark sees”

Depression is like that, never lets you see the light.

I stopped. “Is there someone who wants to come and help me survive this sadness of seeing the light leave and dark see?” I said

No sounds, nothing. “Like I thought” and kept walking

Darkness swallow me as I walk into it. Tears formed in my eyes

“I do” Said a voice from behind

A booming sound, my red eyes stopped forming tears and slowly turned.

A man in white robs with a face that I couldn’t see was standing behind me.

“Would you like to come with me in this long walk of mine?” I asked the mysterious man

“Of course I do, you are my child and I’m never letting you go. Don’t worry this is only a stage of life, soon, you’ll smile again”

For some reason that made me feel better. The man grabbed me from my shoulder as I starting to fall down, the cold was really hitting me now.

“And I’m never letting you fall” Said the man

He kept his hand in his shoulder and we started walking towards the darkness

“Don’t be afraid, darkness is something that doesn’t exist, it’s something that the human kind made to differ what’s bad from what is” “Even darkness has a light”

We kept walking the arctic wonderland with the stars above shinning really bright.

“Just lean on me” Said the man

I woke up in a pile of snow.

My brother was trying to help me up.

“What happened?” I asked

“You had another heart attacked” He said struggling to say it

“Come on now, the light is about to leave and dark is about to see” Said my brother, a young man whose age was around 8 years old, wearing a jacket and comfy pants.

I looked to the sky and saw that the sun was about to set.

I grabbed my brother from his hand and walked towards the darkness where our igloo was. With every step, a ray of light leaving us.

© 2015 Lizardo

Author's Note

This is probably my favorite story that I have writen, because I usually feel like this.
Walking somewhere where my lighit is leaving and I don't know what to do to keep my light. as if darkness swalled me everytime I tried to do something right, as if everything that I do is wrong. "When the light leaves, Dark sees Pt 2" Is a song by a band called Los Campesinos!
I hope you like this story.....