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How I feel now..

I was and I am 

A lonely child of God

Wating for night to fall

I got used to lived

In darkness and sorrow

For the rest of my life

Although I sometimes wonder

If I'm going to see light again

Everyday I walk out

To catch night

When the light leaves

Dark sees

I got used to the dark

I'm alone and lost in my head

When the light leaves 

My hopes go

When dark sees

My sorrow comes

Althouth, 

Now I see comfort

In those lonely nights in my head

I fell down

But got up

And then fell down

Got up

Fell down

Got half up

Fell down

Not even tried

I felt alone and still do now

Don't get me wrong

it's not about love

It's about something in my heart

Something that got lost 

The day I was born

Reviews

[jonah]

hey, Lizardo! I thought I'd come for a visit. it's a beautiful piece, honestly written with all brokenness and deeper longing for God in the darkest hours. 'i was and I am a lonely child of God' i must say thats quite surprising. as God's beautiful children we're never alone. but I'm thinking that this line is referring to the situation every human always face in the loneliness of days, and that is pretty. great poem! keep up the good work bro!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for taking your time to read my poem :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

There is a women minister that informs us of finding God in the darkness because He is there.

I felt a chilling sadness in reading the poem, hence the advice.

Regards,

Al

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for your words friend, I really appreciate it.
I was feeling down when I made this, but I believe that God is going to help me out, so there's no need to worry

[C. Lee Battaglia]

We are all a child of God... He sent us to this earth to gain a body and to go through the many struggles of life... He love's each and everyone of us and that means he loves you to as his child. We have many struggles but through God and Jesus Christ we can be more happy, grateful, and more understanding of others.
He loves you... He care's about you... Don't forget that because he always will be with you.
Even though somethings in our life seem to unfair, we often question, "How can God allow that to happen to me if he cares about me?" He allowed it for a reason, to grow from it. We have the option to think about the negative things or move on and grow from that experience...
Just take it one day at a time... and don't forget it, He loves you.
Keep up the great work bud...

C. Lee Battaglia

[Lizardo]

You are right C.Lee I do understand that...
Your review really lifted my spirtir up today, thank you so much friend :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

wow great writing keep up the good work... :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much :)

[W R Stowe]

Perhaps it is not something lost,maybe it just hasn't been found.Stay searching and until you find it feel free to borrow some of God's natural light.Remember He created two lights "sun" the greater one to rule over the day,and the" moon" the lesser one to rule over the night.The stars have guided sailors and astrologers for centuries so they wouldn't crash into things.Though the clouds become very dark during the day we can still see to find our way.Nice analogy about darkness

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for your kind review!

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

[MsJewel]

With age comes wisdom and the struggles that we endure growing up somehow make sense. To feel something is lost, perhaps not completely whole is something I believe many can relate to. May your faith help you find this missing peice.

:) Julie

[Lizardo]

Thank you for your kind review Julie :)

[Cool Girl]

I think I almost cried..
What a beautiful piece!

[Lizardo]

Came from my heart :)

[Cool Girl]

I could tell:)