A creative part of History

A Story by Lizardo

Universe

Before time existed, darkness walked silently in the dark and every inch of space was devoured by it.

Before the time's existence, when the time was not even born. Darkness played joyfully and enjoyed every inch of its power through space.

But then suddenly a humongous explosion came in with one super massive light that was illuminated and darkness had to retreat at once. Thus the universe was born; Time and Space were created too. Time started to tik too its existence.

A period of chaos came and the flames rose towards the sky, but then everything had calmed down... and year after year, Decades after Decades, millennium after millennium, Darkness's power began to fade. A new source of power was ignited which we call "The Light" and started spreading throughout the space. We are still in the power of light.
As stars and galaxies are also shining through the night, but darkness is watching us from beyond the deep space.

Watching our every step that we make and is waiting patiently for its great come back.

© 2015 Lizardo

Author's Note

I don't know, I was just playing around when this got to my head.

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Terrence Chang

A few improvements can be done I think but you managed to pull it of. Here is my edit in the view

Before time existed, darkness walked silently in the dark and every inch of space was devoured by it.
Before the time's existence, when the time was not even born. Darkness played joyfully and enjoyed every inch of its power through space.
But then suddenly a humongous explosion came in with one super massive light that was illuminated and darkness had to retreat at once. Thus the universe was born; Time and Space were created too. Time started to tik too its existence.
A period of chaos came and the flames rose towards the sky, but then everything had calmed down... and year after year, Decades after Decades, millennium after millennium, Darkness's power began to fade. A new source of power was ignited which we call "The Light" and started spreading throughout the space. We are still in the power of light.
As stars and galaxies are also shining through the night, but darkness is watching us from beyond the deep space.
Watching our every step that we make and is waiting patiently for its great come back.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the edit Terrence, and thank you for stoping by too
I'll fix those mist.. read more

9 Years Ago

Your welcome and keep writing. Keep it up

Cool Girl

Will you slow down xD
You keep writing and I can't keep up with reviewing! Silly silly boy, don't you understand how slow my internet is?!? Lol

Nice job, Lizard Princess (hahahahahahahahaha, I'm so evil)
Really liked this one:) :) :)