When The Days Are Gone

Hear the sound of memories

I wonder how much its going to take...

The wind carries whispers

After every defeat from a love 

A cold breeze through my skin

I feel scared again

When it comes lingering to my heart

Every love a defeat

Man, I have bad luck

When the days are gone

I will be fine

Forget the past and move forward

A stone wall blocking my way

Makes me stay in the past

Remembering my defeats...

Every love a defeat

Every sweetheart a gun

When the days are gone

I will be fine

Just wondering of who it will be

Who is going to be the next one to throw me down?

Every love a broken heart for today

Every wind carries a lost love

The days pass on

I keep thinking of love

Something that I've never tasted before

Every good time and every time 

Loves from the past haunt me

Good memories haunt me down

With a beauty and such grace

A stone wall blocking my way

Every love a defeat from it

Every caring word, a sweet heart

Every Love, a repetition from the other one you used to love

When the days are gone

When the months are gone

When the years cease to exist

When everyone goes to where we started again

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

wow... a very emotional piece this one....and very nicely written too....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much anurag!

[Daisy]

so true.... every love every expectation and every support from people is a defeat...
Wonderful poem.... good job

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Daisy! I'm glad you liked it :)

[Cool Girl]

Reminds me of the song "The Scientist" by Coldplay..
Nice job!!

[Lizardo]

That's a beautiful song...
Thank you so much! :)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:)

[Alfred Kukitz]

I was moved by your sincerity; the feeling of lostness that pervades your soul.

Best bet is try by not looking, let the girl find you.

Regards,

Al

[Lizardo]

I came to the conclusion of doing so.
Thank you for reading my poem and stopping by here.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Keep writing you have talent!

[Valentine]

This is one of the sad things about being a teen or a young person. Attractions happen, we think it is love, then they are gone. Get to really know a person before you think of really caring for them. Personality. character, their beliefs etc. should all be looked at while you are getting to know someone. Good luck in the future. Kathie

[Lizardo]

I will, thank you so much Kathie

[Sami Khalil]

Sad and touching. When those days are gone, it is hard to replace them. Excellent...:)..........

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Sami! I'm glad you like it :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)......................

[MsJewel]

I can feel the sadness in your words Lizardo...I'm certain this was written from a place you don't often show in your writing. You have touched my heart.

:) Julie

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for your kind words Julie, I'm glad you liked it :)

[Ishita Dixit]

Amazing work Lizardo. You have very beautifully depicted a jilted lover.
I especially loved these lines-
"Every love a defeat
Every sweetheart a gun"
Wow!
There are a few grammatical errors though-
it is breeze,not brieze
I feel *scared again
Who is going to be *the next one to throw me down?
*Loves from the past haunt me

It is still fresh, correct the faults quickly! :P

Thanks for sharing it Lizardo! :)

[Lizardo]

I will! thank you so much Ishita! I'm glad you liked it :)

[Ishita Dixit]

You're welcome! :)

[Ishita Dixit]

Amazing work Lizardo. You have very beautifully depicted a jilted lover.
I especially loved these lines-
"Every love a defeat
Every sweetheart a gun"
Wow!
There are a few grammatical errors though-
it is breeze,not brieze
I feel *scared again
Who is going to be *the next one to throw me down?
*Loves from the past haunt me

It is still fresh, correct the faults quickly! :P

Thanks for sharing it Lizardo! :)

[Matching Socks]

This feels so sad Lizardo. Your usual optimism is gone.
It's a great piece of honest writing from you.

[Lizardo]

I woke up kind of sad today...
Thank you so much Ana! I'm glad you liked it :)

[Matching Socks]

We all have those days sweet pea. Smile.

[Lizardo]

You're right, I'll try to :)