I Don't Know

Where to go now?

Maybe I'm down

Or I'm just a thought

Maybe I'm the light

Or I'm just a flaw

I'll see the light

Darkness gets away from here

I'll think of a light

Something new to bring up

Everyone wants the last thing to be just like the first

In a moment I will see my life

It all comes down to this

I'll see a light up stairs

See you in a another world

Where I can rest in peace

Maybe I'm just a thought

Can't make something rhyme

But yet I still write

Maybe I'm falling down

Or I just want to feel down

I'll sink underground 

And get lost in my thoughts

again

Maybe I'm just a thought of light

Energy flowing at the end of the night

I'm just an element

To define 

I'll defy the laws

And maybe I will see light

In my night

Endless nights again

Why is my heart to full of sorrow?

I want to feel 

like everything is okay..

But I feel the same bad way

I'll get lost in my memories

I'll remember the time that I was with you

Sun rising up, Moon rising up

Day and Night

I see you in my heart

I feel down again

I see that everyone has someone to lean on

While I'm lost and alone..

Author's Note

The title says it all, I dont know this is

Reviews

[ANTO]

"Everyone wants the last thing to be just like the first" - wow - such a gem of truth but we are our own worst critics. Dont be so hard on yourself Lizardo (If this is about you and not a character). You will have lulls and times of shining and inbetweens but you are well respected here, whether you post one or none or a hundred poems a day.

"Maybe I'm just a thought of light
Energy flowing at the end of the night" - this is so creative - you do carry a light in the WC

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much ANTO For your kind words! I do think that just because my poems don't rhyme like yours or everyone elses, makes me think that I probably suck at this.
Again, Thank you so much

[ANTO]

And there we have two sides to the poetry coin - on the other hand I feel like a total fish out of water in the depths of prose and non-rhyming pieces. They seem so intellectual - ask any rhymer !! - its such a paradox lol
take care

[ANTO]

well i shouldnt speak for all rhymers but the ones I know have often voiced that concern.

[ANTO]

well not all the ones I know just the one - oh and me ! lol
Im not doing too well here ... sorry Lizardo !

[Lizardo]

hahaha don't worry ANTO! it's fine :)

[B.J]

your title certainly said it all

[Lizardo]

jajajaja thank you for reviewing :)

[B.J]

It was great work, I felt that way for a long time

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Really, you don't know! You want to feel everything being ok, but the reverse alights as the case , and the spring is something you can't boast of knowin. Really you don't know; when you say, maybe there will be light at night... You aren't sure when the light will come..... Every living being at times in life do relate to this... Nice work.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much friend! I really appreciete it :)

[Cool Girl]

Hey, I'm here for you. You can lean on my shoulder.. We' can support each other..
I really like this piece because sometimes I feel that way too. My friends here have helped me though.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful pieces with me:)

[Lizardo]

That is very true :) thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:)